Nice
"My Piece of Weird Work"
spelling please.

Nice
"My Piece of Weird Work"
spelling please.
Why is everyone in this thread obsessed with spelling? Shouldn't we be more concerned with making comments on the alt? I love it, this piece has 'ORIGINAL' written all over it, and it has been put together well, despite the pixel errors.
Off-topic: Roboevil, are you an English teacher?![]()
Last edited by scubadiva; 13-10-2006 at 07:39 PM.
I agree with Scubadiva. Never the less it was rather funny reading what Roboevil wrote. Anyway, the piece is very good! The errors are barely noticable. 9/10
No more dreaming of the dead as the death itself was undone
No more crawling like a crow for a boy, for a body in the garden
No more dreaming like a girl so in love, so long
No more dreaming like a girl so in love, so long
Dreaming like a girl so in love with the wrong world.
^^^As for Cptn.Kewl, 'poster,' assuming you're trying to spell that, has an 'e,' not an 'o.' 'Thing' is spelt without the 'b,' I assume that's a typo. There should be a comma after 'Simon.'
The first sentence is very pretentious and rather blunt, so to say, I find it rude for you to say such a comment.
To continue, 'isometric' is not spelt with an extra 'c,' there shouldn't be a capital after a comma, the third paragraph doesn't even start correctly (along with some others) and there are some other random, grammatical mistakes you've made too. Not to mention the second to last sentence that doesn't start correctly or even make sense. You also never open parenthesis with a capital, unless it's starting a sentence, obviously.
Cough offtopic
I just think the alt needed improvement and now its even better
For people who give advice, it's cool to see someone improving their work following hints and advice they give...
Follow our hints/advice and you'll get better...
lol offtopic = infraction lolz be careful..
anyway ty for the reps people
I have just realized that this is too big, however; I have no idea how to become V.I.P
Well done. I love. What programme did you use to make it?
Do you want Pie?
You own!I'd love to complain about the amount of pixel errors, but they hardly notice and it looks good, never the less. They're easy mistakes that anyone can make.
I do agree with Cptn.Kewl that this is what a poster should look like, which is true, but if you're being padantic, then a Habbo should also lean towards the screen a bit more, as oppose to standing upright. Not to mention all of the other furniture.
As for Cptn.Kewl, 'poster,' assuming you're trying to spell that, has an 'e,' not an 'o.' 'Thing' is spelt without the 'b,' I assume that's a typo. There should be a comma after 'Simon.'
The first sentence is very pretentious and rather blunt, so to say, I find it rude for you to say such a comment.
To continue, 'isometric' is not spelt with an extra 'c,' there shouldn't be a capital after a comma, the third paragraph doesn't even start correctly (along with some others) and there are some other random, grammatical mistakes you've made too. Not to mention the second to last sentence that doesn't start correctly or even make sense. You also never open parenthesis with a capital, unless it's starting a sentence, obviously.
back to topic!
Very different, and very cool, well done!
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