i really like this one, the colours go well and its very hot.
CC;
- Turn the lamp on to bring a focus to the room, theres too much of the same colour.
- Whys the table glass blue? ;o make it see-thro
- Add more people dining etc.
- Write a menu on the black board.
- Put a little stool next to the cash machine and a woman collecting money.
Its really great. 9.4/10 +rep.
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Thread: The Deli
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It is very good! If you speant some more time shading and adding those special little details it might be able to reach the elites, its up to the Alteration moderators!
No more dreaming of the dead as the death itself was undone
No more crawling like a crow for a boy, for a body in the garden
No more dreaming like a girl so in love, so long
No more dreaming like a girl so in love, so long
Dreaming like a girl so in love with the wrong world.
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Nice... Long time since i last commented on somones work. ;P
I was trying to find some pixel errors but i couldent see any... But add some stuff like more people? Some one working there? And write on the black menu bord thing.
Ill give you a 9/10, As soon as you add a little more it will be a 10/10.
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13-10-2006, 11:36 PM #14Dubble Guest
OMG well done i love it 10/10 + rep
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The seats are rather plain, try rounding them. Also, add some writing on the board. This piece has potential.
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This alt is extremely good, one thing I hate is the lack of colour, you could of added a more better done to the room, like so;
However I think the colours where used very well, and lol I added 2 random things on the tables, I got carried away. [:
9/10.
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