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  1. 14-03-2005, 06:27 PM #11
    Spotteh
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    Default 10/10

    cool story 10/10
    http://rewardhits.com/index.php?hit=16623
    Click it You know You Want To
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  2. 14-03-2005, 06:42 PM #12
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    Yeah, it's pretty good, but you mostly focused on one technique, vivid description, which is pretty good, but I think it could be even better.

    Although I think it's very imaginative, in a kinda freaky way, maybe you were a murderer in a previous life.




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  3. 14-03-2005, 06:44 PM #13
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    never read it all "You breathe heavily as you stare down at the red-headed woman" *stops* but i read a bit more welldone and 9/10 ace!
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  4. 14-03-2005, 06:47 PM #14
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    Quote Originally Posted by .x-aimee-x.
    Yeah, it's pretty good, but you mostly focused on one technique, vivid description, which is pretty good, but I think it could be even better.

    Although I think it's very imaginative, in a kinda freaky way, maybe you were a murderer in a previous life.
    Ooh God Wouldn't that make a great story plot!!

    Thankyou Aimee!

    And quite possibly considering I am also writing a poem about a man who killed his lover I could have been Jack The Ripper
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  5. 14-03-2005, 06:50 PM #15
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    Quote Originally Posted by Painiac
    Ooh God Wouldn't that make a great story plot!!

    Thankyou Aimee!

    And quite possibly considering I am also writing a poem about a man who killed his lover I could have been Jack The Ripper
    Hm...yes, perhaps, *scared*.




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  6. 14-03-2005, 07:10 PM #16
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    Lol, Don't fear me... I am justly misunderstood *disappears in a mysterious sweep of my cape* -.- lol
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  7. 14-03-2005, 07:12 PM #17
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    Great story. I enjoyed reading it. Short but very enjoyable. Rep added
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  8. 14-03-2005, 07:37 PM #18
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    Thankyou... I'm wondering whether I should hold a competition in which people make animations showing part of that story and I give a prize for best.
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  9. 25-03-2005, 09:15 PM #19
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    one word; WOW
    These wounds won't seem to heal
    This pain is just too real
    There’s just too much that time cannot erase
    When you cried I’d wipe away all of your tears
    When you'd scream I’d fight away all of your fears
    I held your hand through all of these years
    But you still have...all of me
    [......Evanescence - My Immortal......]


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  10. 25-03-2005, 09:26 PM #20
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    Thankyou
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