Starwars The station Chronicles

[hit-by-a-car]

if i wad was joking why would i be posting it here and not the Jokes and funny stuff forum :rolleyes:

[PaintYourTarget]

Can you post a sample?

[hit-by-a-car]

the work hasnt been copyrighted. Ill post a rough draft.

The red alert began to ring again; the Jedi weren’t bothered in the slightest, they just walked straight into more droids and drew there light sabers and destroyed more after more. Suddenly the alert stopped, the Jedi felt a minute of relief until they saw the figure that they had both feared before, he was staring straight at the Jedi from a distance. “JEDI, YOU CAN NOT ESCAPE FATE SURRENDER” the figure said, the words flew around the room in a hot second and left both Jedi thrilled. The figure started to walk towards the Jedi, however after a few pacers he stopped and noticed Anthony hiding behind Luke, “I SEE YOU HAVE A NEW APPRENTICE” the figure said. Luke told Anthony to run, but Anthony was not prepared to cower out of another fight “I can not leave” Anthony screamed. Suddenly Anthony drew his light saber from his pocket and ran towards the figure, Luke tried to stop Anthony but it was hopeless. Anthony had ran close enough to the figure he swung his light saber but the figure suddenly blocked it with his light saber, the figure growled the figure suddenly stepped back and tried to plunge the beam through Anthony’s head. The figure stepped back yet again and said “YOUR JEDI POWERS ARE TO WEAK I CAN GRANT YOU INFINITIE POWER!” Luke screamed to Anthony “Don’t listen to him, he’s bluffing, now hurry Anthony before you’re killed”.

[Ezzie.]

I know it's a draft but I hope that's not the actual text you're publishing as there were a lot of punctual errors that a publisher would not accept.

[Wootzeh]

I HIGHLY doubt it will be published as it would have to ojed by George Lucas.

[Jõnathan]

Is it me or does the name LUKE JAMES remind me of some idiot on this forum...

[Yeum]

Is it me or does the name LUKE JAMES remind me of some idiot on this forum...

I remember some thing to do with 'Luke-James' and this will never get published -_-

[hit-by-a-car]

yeh luke james is the guy who made the cover for me... some guy on a my-space. we met up around a year ago.

[manga21]

the cover is awful and it wont get published its copyright to lucas

[hit-by-a-car]

Yes, you dont need copyright off lucas at all. Some great titles have been published scot free

like Starwars: The lightsabers tale and Starwar Holiday battles. They had nothing to do with lucas, written by teenagers and were both big hits