[BIO] The Paradise Sofa. [v4 - FINAL!]

[tyrez]

I like it +Rep

[Shawnstra]

Good final version 10/10

[jackass]

Thanks all.

[jackass]

Couldn't edit. I may be making a Final-Final version, because by the look of this thread, obviously the others were better. So please post C/C. Thanks.

[Ashhizzle]

thats hot! can't think of anything to improve tbh

[Ed.]

That edited version of it is soo much better!

10/10!

+REP+

[Ekalb]

Couldn't edit. I may be making a Final-Final version, because by the look of this thread, obviously the others were better. So please post C/C. Thanks.

You need to make the chair more suitable. Perhaps try an interesting grain on the wood, some kind of pattern on the material so it looks like it might be from some organic material. You also need to add some kind of significance as to how the middle rope and the back rest join because a thick looking rope doesn't just magically join up with a completely different material with no signs of the actual join. Maybe try making it thicker.

[jackass]

You need to make the chair more suitable. Perhaps try an interesting grain on the wood, some kind of pattern on the material so it looks like it might be from some organic material. You also need to add some kind of significance as to how the middle rope and the back rest join because a thick looking rope doesn't just magically join up with a completely different material with no signs of the actual join. Maybe try making it thicker.

Okay thanks for your help, i'm making a final version 2, which will defiantly be the final one, no doubt about it. So please, just please tell me how to improve on it before its too late.
EDIT; Btw guys, i'm now working on another project, you could say its a damn lot bigger than this, well its something huge and not for guestrooms, but thats all i'm saying for now. Thread coming soon & I hope you all support me on it.