
I understand the concept of explaining things later on in the story, but if you're going to do that you shouldn't write so much involving the things that we know nothing about. It makes it too confusing and very messy.This is not the first time it has happened to me..... everything will be explained later on, it's how you anticipate it, that makes it.
Most of simple things will be mensioned later on, especially why no-one interfered with the brawl, there is a very special reason.....
I have actually written a bit more this afternoon, I'm up to Chapter 10 now, just 1 more to go.
Looooooooooonng Decision.... decided that all chapters after this I'll have to do something special with.... the Book is finished now, after it's final edit. Expect every single chapter up by next week.
I'm going to start on something small after it, then plan the 2nd Meaning of Memory story.
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