
Very nice design and colours - keep up the good work!
Looks alright.. maybe umm..
- Try not to use a pink design combined with a same pink as background, try dark gray or something as a background. Dark colours combined with pink look better as there is more contrast
- Try to make your own logo, believe me, i can't count anymore how many times i have seen that standard included logo with photoshop.
- I see like some wierd colourd lines going trough the design, maybe give them a different colour ?
edit; these gray lines
I'd either use very light pink or dark slightly darked pink for them lines
Overall i'd give that an 7/10 - 7,5/10
Good job
Last edited by [Oli]; 21-07-2007 at 09:24 PM.
My second critique ... Back to laugh
You may not know me, but Im an **** that is REAL about design, and the lack of people's ability.
1. Purple ... Not good ... Especially when thats nearly the ONLY colour
2. The Flur-Elise arn't correct. You've stretched them ... When you are drawing a shape with the pen toold hold the SHIFT key, so that they keep their dimensions. Its an aspect stretch
3. It's all bg and bulky ... Not attractive
4. The text ... Use standard fonts, with real sizes, and the NONE, SMOOTH, CRISP, etc, boxes, set to NORMAL ... Its a more realistic view
To sumarise, its a bulky design, that needs some attention to correct it's masses of errors
i like it looks good well done
Looking for a good desiner to design a social networking template.
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Why are you making someone elses portfolio?
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