Life is a ?

[jammy06]

Its great i love ur poems Read it again because it rocks:

Life is a **** up.
Nothing goes right,
The sweet things turn sour,
Each day becomes night.

Good Intentions are selfish,
Bad Intentions spread hate.
You end up six feet under,
Thats everyones fate.

The rich people get richer,
The poor never try?
You can put on a smile.
But lie in bed alone and cry.

Nobodys perfect.
Some hide this away.
But its always revealed.
At the end of the day *Dont like this line*

Some people have families.
But it can all be a lie.
Others are always let down.
However hard that they try.

You may fall in love,
But is it all about fate?
What would of happend,
If you were a minute to late?

Some people show emotion.
Others hearts become cold.
Some sit and listen.
Others won't do as there told.

You set everything out.
Have it all planned.
But what if it washes away?
Like writing on sand.

Life is a *****
You try and you try.
To do everything perfect
But in the end we all die.

[Bef]

Thanks, ive written loads more but there not really, sutible for habbox, plus my teachers got them. lol, il try and right some sutible ones. i write about my life and feelings and um the other poems ive done are quite distressing. With one of my poems called You could have been someone i made everyone cry including myself. I'ts about a personal experience of mine...

[hedgeog325]

Like your poem + its great!