I quite like that actually.
Id bring the line spacinh on the right hand side down a little.

Well in my college that would be allowed. I'm sure my teacher would love it.
If you have a male teacher I don't think he'll mind.
Quote because we need to see it again. I beleive it is marked whether it follows the ASA code, so you could research it a bit and if he says it isn't allowed say that it is within the ASA code. I think it would be allowed, in real advertising perhaps. But not very likely...Right, for a peice of homework we had to do two adverts, i've done the first one with ease, but the second one I'm not sure if i'll get a bollocking for.
"The second advert will be targeting the chocolate bar at a completly different audience and will be found in NUTS magazine - a magazine aimed at men in their twenties who are intrested in humour, sports and women."
Will it be allowed do you think? I think it's quite good, accept the quality, but it's saved on paint, and I dont know any other way I can save without quality loss.
Thanks.
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It's allowed I'm sure, because in my school they had a porn mag, isn't it like FTN?? Or something and I asked mi media teacher and she said "I asked the newsagent and she said it's ok, it's not under the porn section, it's a soft-porn and people your age can look at it, it shows different camera shots" so I think it's okay, to make it better why not put a background like this:
http://www.pralinette.com/Graphics/W..._1280x1024.jpg I think it's good
Oh and try and put some style into the font.
drink up this bottle of yeah
and P A I N T your body on me
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