My Coursework For English ;D

[:-:Mariah:-:]

you get an f because it dnt have a structure
plz invest in a dictionary

[zeJosh]

Mariah heed your own advice.
You can't even spell properly :rolleyes:

[drama]

full stops pls.


I just finished doing my 'A Veiw from the Bridge' summary, took ****ign aaaaaages.

[:-:Mariah:-:]

Mariah heed your own advice.
You can't even spell properly :rolleyes:

hush ur gums n darlin i'm usin slang it dnt mean i cant spell
PLZ shush cos ur CRAP!!!!!!!
thanx

[zeJosh]

"Hush my gums because I am crap"
Yes.. Ok.. :rolleyes:

[The Don]

I couldnt really understand it but the bits i could were good Keep it up but try and not use but all the time it gets boring. When i did something like this i got a 6a

[beth]

it has no proper structure, you don't make use of punctuation and you create no suspence by thus removing the punctuation.
i would be surprised if your teacher graded it with that lack of basic english language knowledge.