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    I wanted some bigger trees, however your right about the door.

    Big glass door i guess oO

    ok Stickie

    I forgot to do the sidewalk proparly though it needs shading, the trees are suppost be old ones btw that are really big naturally, however i think ive done the door way too big... three cars high and a car wide.

    Ps on my screen everything is dark, i mean really dark... i need to clean it because it makes it hard to do shading.
    Last edited by Chocobos; 18-12-2007 at 10:21 PM.
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    the building looks like square-shaped barf, the rest is nice. 7/10
    +rep cuz i luv u 333
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    thanks.
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    Nice, its a lot better then the first one so +rep for improving, do what the others said ^ and everyone will love it!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dalk View Post
    Nice, its a lot better then the first one so +rep for improving, do what the others said ^ and everyone will love it!
    I agree with Jacob. I'm glad to see you've added some colour to the building, instead of that grey one.

    Well done

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    I think you need to go for a more difficult building shape, maybe have a look at a picture of a manor or mansion and try to copy its features.





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    I named it Chocobos Manor because i couldnt think of a name, alot of you are right though because the glass door is way too big and the pavement isnt shaded. oO
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chocobos View Post
    This was done by scratch, no C+P so hopefully it will be better, im quite happy with how the trees turned out... look better than the ones on UK Hotel view.



    Clouds and cars may look wonky but they are hard to do.

    /10? and C&C.
    you lied, you said there was no c+p, but you've just drawn 1 tree and c+p'ed it, and you've c+ped the wonky car... if it's called "chocobos world" should it not have a c ontop, if that's supposed to be a helepad, it's way too big, try making it smaller. still too bright and not much texture, on bit on the sidewalk is not isometric
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    Once again it's a bit too bright, but better colours than the last. Things are still out of proportion, ahd the tree trunks don't have good shading and aren't isometric. Very plain, and not all trees are the same size and grow in lines

    5/10.

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    Sorry, im still not quite good at shading yet and i need to take some tutorials.

    I thought the Helipad was a little too big, but what if a Jumbojet landed there? ;o

    ps. Kyle i dont understand what you mean, the Sidewalk looks istrometric to me but ill give it a zoom in and check.

    Could you possibly explain in closer detail to me?

    Im trying to get better.

    also Kyle, i meant no C+P of things from hotel view, the trees we're created by me so its ok

    Thanks for C+C, ill work on my alts more closely next time and ill take more time with the shading.

    This alt took 30-50 minutes about.
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