What you think ?

[RSTurbo]

Eww.
Practise more

[Johno]

Nope, It doesnt look right!

The font should be in a "regular" font such as Verdana and have it a reasonable size where it doesnt look bold or terrible pixelated!

The navigation doesnt seem right either, it should be vertically centered within the grey box and also horizontally centered

It needs alot more work, it could be better off starting afresh!