Soul Eater

[Kyle]

Hey Tom, you kept annoying me yesterday and telling me to post on your alt, so here goes.

I realise the base isn't part of your creation but I find all of the bases that you have used look awful. The first base you have used, you have drawn some kind of dodgy cracks on and cut half of it off, placing this "souleater" of yours on the edge, causing it to appear as if it is going to fall off any moment now. You could ATLEAST have made the inside lines lighter instead of black. The second base is the same as the first, but I quite like the effect of the slime or what ever that is. The third base, well that's just appalling! You've attempted some kind of camoflague effect, but failed so badly the final base is just boring Oh yeah, and finally, where are the shadows? :8

Okay now I've ranted about your bases I guess I should post a little something about your alts, right? Okay, the first alt you did looked very flat, due to the shading not being dark enough to stand out... I can only see the shading if I look at it closely.

Your second alt of the human is quite good, I like the way you have shaded under it's eyes etc and the slime dripping off of it, although I do have a slight problem - The color. It's extremely dull and in my opinion should be brighter.

The second soul eater you made... that's just LOL what's going on with it?

Your V2 of your first soul eater is a little better than your first - The arms look much better and you've added a tail which makes it seem slightly less flat, but I still think you need to shade the legs with a darker colour, since it doesn't show up very well.

Ok this probably isnt the 36 lines of critisism I promised you, but I think I got my point across

[dbgtz]

that was only 14 lines, and yes, I did fail in the camo. By the way you can't critisise an alt because of what it's doing
Also only 14 lines, throne please

[Accipiter]

i don't like the legs but he's k as kyle said you need stronger shades some of our eyes ain't good, It will probs look better towards a dark background.

[Kyle]

that was only 14 lines, and yes, I did fail in the camo. By the way you can't critisise an alt because of what it's doing
Also only 14 lines, throne please

rubbish alt, throne please

[dbgtz]

Better then ur mum

[dbgtz]

Oops sorry, double posted from lag

[Kyle]

Better then ur mum

-rep

[ItsDave]

Hm, thats cool, very imagintive. well dun.

[leah]

lol the alien reminds me of scooby doo!
its good!

[Minstrels]

Love it!