Hosting Template Improvements

[ThisNameWillDo!]

I think I'll just give up and leave it to a designer

http://www.habboxforum.com/showthread.php?t=571482

[ThisNameWillDo!]

Okay I redone it, what do you guys think? What can I improve on?

http://www.sacillianmafia.co.uk/host...latedraft4.PNG

[MrPinkPanther]

Okay I redone it, what do you guys think? What can I improve on?

http://www.sacillianmafia.co.uk/host...latedraft4.PNG

Better but needs much more colour and flare. Its a bit too light for me too.

[ThisNameWillDo!]

Better but needs much more colour and flare. Its a bit too light for me too.

What colours would you reccomend and in what parts?

[Excellent2]

Okay I redone it, what do you guys think? What can I improve on?

http://www.sacillianmafia.co.uk/host...latedraft4.PNG

Bloody good improvement from your last attempt but I still feel it's too bland. Having them images all over the place doesn't compliment the design. You will need to make some space for a logo. Fill it with content and see what it looks like.

[ThisNameWillDo!]

Bloody good improvement from your last attempt but I still feel it's too bland. Having them images all over the place doesn't compliment the design. You will need to make some space for a logo. Fill it with content and see what it looks like.

Okay I'll fill it in, then we'll see what it's like. I'll post back here when it's done, or edit this post if I can.

[Excellent2]

Okay I'll fill it in, then we'll see what it's like. I'll post back here when it's done, or edit this post if I can.

Just post below so you don't get infracted

[ThisNameWillDo!]

Okay thanks. I've filled it in, but please note, these are not the fonts, text or images I will be using, it's just an example, just incase some people take it seriously.

http://www.sacillianmafia.co.uk/host...ftfilledin.PNG

[ThisNameWillDo!]

Sorry I forgot to put in my last post, what do you guys think? Anything specific I can improve on?

Thanks for your help so far.

[Dentafrice]

You're trying to portray what services you offer.. not what other services and companies you use.

In your design, you're putting your main focus on the other company's logos.. when they should be at the bottom.. if you even have to have them on there.

You need to focus more on your own company and your own services then what services you use.