Teenage Lives

[Immenseman]

Don't sound too surprised Ben, Joey is a good writer*+*

[VelvetClover]

I read some of it and it seems quite good but it would be easier and more enjoyable to read if it wasn't in script format.

[Lost]

Nice, good work !

+REP.

[Pyroka]

OMG I LOVE YOU MCCALL I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOUUUU

[FlyingJesus]

Psychical...

Tut tut Joey.

[Mrs.McCall]

Just don't make the story lines too unrealistic, I need to be able to relate to what's happening, to an extent.

Yeah that's always been my issue. It goes a bit crazy at the start but you'll see I'm going somewhere with it

Owoh, tht was good I actually really enjoyed it!

Thanks!

I read some of it and it seems quite good but it would be easier and more enjoyable to read if it wasn't in script format.

What format would you prefer?

OMG I LOVE YOU MCCALL I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOU I LOVE YOUUUU

LMAO x

Psychical...

Tut tut Joey.

I sorry.

[Mrs.McCall]

Part 2

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[Back in the Psychiatrists’ office]

Psychiatrist: So Nate rejected you?

Danny: Or so I thought

Psychiatrist: That must’ve been difficult for you

Danny: I was confused. I didn’t know what to think. I was having all these feelings that I’d never had. I had never fancied a boy before but when I looked into his eyes it was like something inside me flipped. Like a switch. He was beautiful. So beautiful.

Psychiatrist: So what happened after he left?

Danny: He didn’t speak to me for days and was all over Stacey but one day something happened and that’s when I knew we’d be together

[Flashback. Back of the School. We see Nate’s brother Rick walking down the pathway. Two boys step out]

Boy #1: So, your brother thinks he’s hard eh?

Rick: What?

Boy #1: Your brother, walking around like he’s top dog

Rick: He doesn’t act like anything... who are you?

Boy #2: We’re your worst nightmare

[The boys close in on Rick and with a sickening thud one of them punches Rick in the face]

Boy #1: Woah, leave it out

[The other boy kicks Rick in the ribs over and over. Nate comes around the corner with Stacy and Danny]

Stacy: Oh my god!

Nate: OI!

[Nate races after the boys as Danny and Stacy run over to Rick]

Danny: Rick, are you OK? Rick? Can you hear me?

Stacy: Is he dead?!

Danny: Does he look dead to you?

[Danny rolls his eyes and takes off his jacket, rolls it up and places it under Rick’s head]

Danny: You’re best not moving, not until you’re checked out. Stacy go get help

[Stacy runs off to get help. There is a loud scream]

Danny: NATE! Rick, i’ll be right back

[Danny runs further to the back of the field. The two boys are throwing rocks at Nate as he lashes out. Danny runs and tackles one of the boys, punching him hard]

Danny: Are you OK?

Nate: I will be

[Danny lets go of the boy and he runs off. Nate continually punches him. Danny jumps on the back of Nate to restrain him]

Danny: Nate! STOP! STOP IT, PLEASE! YOU’LL KILL HIM

[Nate steps back, shocked. The boy lies battered and bloodied on the floor]

Danny: Oh my god

Nate: He’s not moving

Danny: Calm down

[Danny goes over to the boy]

Danny: You go help Rick, Nate, I’ll stay here

[Danny checks the pulse of the boy on the floor. A teacher comes running over]

Teacher: Oh my god, what happened?

Danny: I was chasing him because he beat up Rick and he tripped over

Teacher: He did this by falling?!

Danny: Yeah, he tripped over these rocks

[The teacher looks at the rocks. Danny looks at her, worried. Present day]

Psychiatrist: So you covered for him?

Danny: The boy deserved it

Psychiatrist: Nate was a lot older

Danny: I thought you weren’t here to judge

Psychiatrist: Sorry, so then what happened?

[Flashback. Outside Nate’s house. Danny knocks and Nate answers]

Nate: Oh, hey

[Nate signals for Danny to come in]

Danny: Where are your mum and dad?

Nate: Rick’s still in the hospital. He’s got bruised ribs but he’s OK

Danny: What about that boy?

Nate: He’s broken his nose but he’s sticking to the story

Danny: Good, he’s probably terrified of you finishing off the job

Nate: Excuse me?

Danny: I mean, what are you? Some sort of thug?! That was disgusting

Nate: They beat up my brother

Danny: Yes! I know, but you nearly killed him. What the hell got into you?

Nate: Oh get lose will you?

Danny: Why, you going to beat me up to are you?

[Nate stands up]

Danny: Come on, big shot, hit me

Nate: SHUT UP

Danny: Think you’re a big man do you?

[Nate grunts loudly and gets right in Danny’s face]

Danny: You’re pathetic

[Danny goes to walk away but Nate grabs his arm tightly and pulls him towards him and they kiss]

Nate: It’s you

Danny: Me?

Nate: I’m so confused

Danny: So am I but I don’t go beating people up

Nate: I don’t know what to do

Danny: I don’t know what there is to do

Nate: I need you, Danny

Danny: And what about Stacy

Nate: What about Stacy?!

Danny: She thinks you love her

Nate: I do

Danny: You just kissed me, Nate

Nate: I don’t know, Danny...

[Nate sits back down, he puts his head in his hands and begins to cry]

Nate: One minute I am this normal straight lad who has a fit girlfriend and knows what he wants but then you, you come along and mix me up and I don’t know what to do, Danny. I don’t even know who I am. Am I gay? I can’t be gay.. it’s... it’s not normal. And my Dad would kill me... I’d lose everything

Danny: Hey, calm down

[Danny puts his arm around Nate]

Nate: And yet i’d be willing to lose everything if I meant I could be with you

[They kiss again and begin to undress. Present day]

Psychiatrist: So he declared his love, you declared it back, then what?

Danny: We had an affair for a few months, I guess. It got kind of fun, kind of addictive. We’d meet up in School in secret. Little touches when nobody was looking, it became a game but every day we fell deeper in love

Psychiatrist: And when did it stop?

Danny: The school year was drawing to a close and Nate said he had the perfect plan

[Flashback, Danny’s room]

Danny: Are you kidding me?!

Nate: It’s perfect, Danny

Danny: How are we going to afford to run away Nate?

Nate: We’ll get jobs

Danny: What about college?

Nate: London has colleges

Danny: And our families

Nate: WE’D be each other’s family

Danny: This is insane

Nate: Come with me Danny, we can be together

[Nate goes closer to Danny]

Nate: Forever

[They kiss again, Nate starts to unbutton Danny’s shirt. Downstairs Danny’s Mum goes to the front door with her shopping. Stacy walks behind her]

Stacy: Oh, Hi, I’m here to see Danny... I want to talk to him about Prom

Danny’s Mum: Ah right, he might be in. Go check his room love

Stacy: Do you need help?

Danny’s Mum: Thanks love

[Stacy helps carry in some bags. She places them on the kitchen side]

Stacy: I’ll go see if he’s there

[There is several loud thuds]

Danny’s Mum: He must be rearranging his room again

Stacy: Ah right, sounds like he could use some help

[She ventures upstairs]

Stacy: Danny?

[We hear a door opening and a loud scream. Present day]

Danny: I’ll never forget that day, the look in her eyes. She was heartbroken

Psychiatrist: Wow, must’ve been hard for her

Danny: I never thought about that at the time, she was just in the way of our true love

Psychiatrist: So when she found out...?

Danny: All hell broke loose. She ran downstairs and told my mother and then when straight over to Nate’s. He was devastated. In literally an hour everyone knew.

Psychiatrist: How did Nate react?

Danny: He said we should run away

Psychiatrist: And you never?

Danny: I decided to stay and face up to what we’d done, I wasn’t ashamed

Psychiatrist: But Nate had other ideas

Danny: Yeah

[Flashback, a bus station]

Danny: Nate please

Nate: I can’t live there anymore Danny, seeing everyone every day

Danny: What happened to us being family, Nate

Nate: We can be, come with me

Danny: I can’t abandon everything now

Nate: I won’t stay and be hated, Danny

Danny: I won’t hate you!

Nate: I’m sorry Danny

[A bus pulls up]

Danny: Please Nate, please stay

Nate: I can’t

Danny: Stay for me

Nate: I love you

Danny: I NEED YOU, DON’T GO

[Danny breaks down as the bus drives away. Present day]

Psychiatrist: You told me he abandoned you after it all came out?

Danny: I lied, to everyone... I was ashamed that he left me I always said he left secretly but the truth is I wish I’d have gone with him. We’d probably still be together

Psychiatrist: You stayed and faced it like a man Danny, you should be proud

Danny: I lost everything, which is why I have to do what I’m doing

Psychiatrist: You’re looking for answers where they don’t exist

Danny: I HAVE TO FIND ALEXIS, SHE IS STILL ALIVE!

Psychiatrist: She isn’t Danny

Danny: I’ll prove it, just you watch

[Danny storms out the room. Suddenly his phone rings]

Voice: You were right. She’s alive and well. I have proof. Meet me at our usual place

[END]

[VelvetClover]

What format would you prefer?

If it read like a proper story I would be more interested in it but everyone else seems to really like it so it doesn't really matter lol. I think you could make it much more detailed as well if it wasn't in script format.

[Rozi]

LOL, i love it. But i'm confused Who's Alexis?

[Mrs.McCall]

LOL, i love it. But i'm confused Who's Alexis?

Alexis is Danny's old friend. You have to read the other four series to understand. Here:

Series One

Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 6
Episode 7
Episode 8
Finale

Christmas Special

Series Two

Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 6
Episode 7
Episode 8
Finale

Series Three

Episode 1 Part One
Episode 1 Part Two
Episode 2
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 6
Episode 7
Episode 8
Episode 9
Episode 10
Episode 11
Episode 12
Episode 13
Episode 14
Finale

Series Four

Episode 1
Episode 2
Episode 3
Episode 4
Episode 5
Episode 6
Episode 7
Episode 8
Episode 9
Finale