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[LauFish]

Looks great!

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[jacko2244]

Awesome! I like it


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The line-art is great. Seriously. Fluid and inventive, especially for the two people on the title screen.

My flaw is that your palette choice, and your shading are borderline awful. The heart in the game, assuming it represents life points, has two shades which are virtually the same, I had to strain my eyes to see the subtle difference -- one shade is a teeny darker and less saturated.

Otherwise it's great.

Boon

[Kyle]

The line-art is great. Seriously. Fluid and inventive, especially for the two people on the title screen.

My flaw is that your palette choice, and your shading are borderline awful. The heart in the game, assuming it represents life points, has two shades which are virtually the same, I had to strain my eyes to see the subtle difference -- one shade is a teeny darker and less saturated.

Otherwise it's great.

Boon

The palette was limited for the competition