
pretty much what he said...I'd like to contradict one of your first points by saying I did not have lots of fun reading it. My eyes hurt by reading various different colours, and a capital letter is not required at the start of every word. The jokes were terrible, your grammar is terrible, your punctuation is terrible, your spelling is terrible. You can't lay out a sentence, and what's the deal with ending every title with 'of the issue. ?'
'Habboween Has Come To An End Which Means the Habboween Furniture Is Comming To An End On Habbo Which Means The Furni Will be Out Of The Catalogue.'
'Congratulations To Them official Fansites And If Yours Didnt Get Through, Then Dont Worry Maybe Try Again Next Time.'
Here You Can have Lots Of Fun Reading This And I Know You Will Want To Issue.
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Jordan
Arghhh capital letters at the start of every word....arrrggh! and er, I really didn't get the jokes at all.
But yeah, nice idea. Keep working on it to make it better.
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