First Ever Professional Layout

[Richie]

it reminds me of a hosting layout

[DuxRawr]

I think you should look at websites that have been made already and then look at yours, for a first attempt, its not too bad. But its very in your face and bunched up, try and stick to one colour scheme thats A bit more relaxed.

http://www.webdesignfromscratch.com/basics/ < Its got some really useful articles on there.

http://creattica.com/ < Have a look around that, but use it for inspiration and dont copy anything

Good luck with your next design

[Anamations]

You're missing the proffesional bit.

Lol u made my day even though were only a hour and 50 mins into it D:

[mileszilla]

First of all, lose the words under DEVOTE RADIO. They make the banner look clustered and unorganized. The aligning is, well... crap.

Instead of:

Can you read between the lines? Yes
you. I bet your only paying attention to the aligning
and not me. Well why don't you go eat
a... hmm... well. Anyways so I know your not reading this.
I've made my great point.

Do this:

Can you read between the lines? Yes
you. I bet your only paying attention
to the aligning and not me. Well why
don't you go eat a... hmm... well.
Anyways so I know your not reading
this. I've made my point great point.

See, the aligning is better in the second example.

Try fixing the colors into a more "clean" style. :eusa_shif

[Black_Apalachi]

I quite like the updated version. Most criticisms have already been suggested but the main one for me is just the main text. It needs to be a different font, maybe slightly smaller. It would look even better if it had its own little background area too, perhaps like a shaded area so you can still see the main background through it but it just makes the text clearer