Good effort, however...
I don't think newbies would read all of this, first stanza then they'll get bored.
You should have thought first what you would like to write about, and then instead of writing an essay, make a step-by-step guide on how to become a good Fomrum member. Bullet points help to breakdown loooong sentances and makes it easier to digest the learning, I know I may sound like a teacher here but it worked for me![]()












