
Okay few things here
You'd probably be better off making this into a non-habbo alt really
1. The washing machine on the left is very basic and lacks really any shadingand the circle is not isometric, try and work on those as wellas the main feature of the alt.
2. The one second from the right looks almost, too skinny! Where her body is under her boobs she looks completely flatand I think a bit more shading is needed there,
3. Where you've tried to add cheekbones on the one on the far left, the colour is far too light and looks like a line on her face.
4. All their lips are similar and look a bit weird really, in my opinion.
5. The one that's almost ginger in the middle, her dress lacks shading etc. around the detail imo and doesn't look write, almost basic looking.
Anyway, it's a very good job in my opinion, but probably would be best off as a non-habbo alt as it's not really stuck to the habbo shapes/sizes etc.
+REP anyway, if you follow my criticism points, I'm sure it'll look much better!
thanks guys!
Also, I don't usually do WIPs but I have one for this which is from when I was trying to create the bubble effect at the bottom.. but failed miserably so obv I left it out of the actual alt.
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I really like the design outline wise, but I am not a fan of the shading on their face and body parts. Try making it more smooth and add colors to the palette.
Really good but i think you need to work on the faces.
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