It's a bit rushed, but still quite good. I would neaten up on lines and make the edges more neat.

You need to learn isometric angling before you can do habbo styled graphics.
as said before, looks like a hous ethat has gone wrong. Perhaps take more time smoothing the edges and keeping them within the lines. Perhaps a more rounded cake aswell. Keep trying though, you're sure to get better.
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