Toy Story

**dbgtz** · 04-06-2011, 08:56 AM

Jessie - I'm guessing with the hair you used a referrence where she is actually moving, therefore the pony tail should not be seen (it also kinda looks like it's coming out the hat). I also dislike how the yellow thing on her shoulders doesnt have a black outline where other things do (same comment for the buttons too). Oh, after looking back at a picture I realise that they're not on seperate layers, sorry about that but I also realise that the collar should have black outlines and go around the head more. The bluething also should go completely around and be a more denim blue.

Woody - The legs are improportionate to the body, if you look at a woody image the legs are longer, not the top half. In terms of the sleeves, the one on the right seems to be much shorter, probably not reaching his wrist whereas the one on the left touches the hand almost. Really the one on the left should be shorter if any of them are. Furthermore, the red lines are really straight and don't really follow how a body would be. I know it's meant to be toy like, but he's not flat. Also the jacket shouldn't be so tight to his body.

Buzz - The hands, they look like they bend. I know what you're trying to do but it just looks like they're bent and half of it doesn't look like it's meant to be part of the hand. Looking at a referrence, the hand part is around equal size to the bit before the hand. The fingers themselves look pretty weird to be honest aswell, but that may just be because of the weird hand shape. On the grey "elbow", I don't get why the bit facing the body has no black outline? Moving on, I do like the wings (although I'm not quite sure why the black lines crossover at the top). Final thing, I think there was some wrong proportioning here as the chest/torso area seems way too small, and the black bit linking the upperbody to the lower body seems way too big, but I guess thsi may be just to suit the habbo theme. Overall though he's the best of the three, with Woody probably being the worst.

Also one small thing with woody and Jessie, but the dark line under their eyes make them look tired.

Perhaps try making smaller isometric graphics as, to be honest, they're much more challenging and overall can be much nicer.