MALE Bunny interrupted by Cat

[Seikou]

haha, that's really cool! well done :-)

[Meloneeze.]

very good, the second version is much better but as people have mentioned, the bump on the hip area looks abit odd and the hand that is up too the face looks rather thin in comparison to the other one!

well done tho! +rep

Also the shadow under both the bunny and dog is cut off.

Tbh shadow is too dark, and as Maria said the bulge is really weird, other than that I quite like it.

This looks better then what it did before, but what's the odd bump near his leg? I also thing the shading is to heavy for the background colour, change it to a lighter tone. Over then that, well done

Thanks and sorry I haven't replied very soon, I had to go to worship all things learning a.k.a school Actually still at school, I will get these done as soon as I can. The buldge is his butt, will fix it Also, I'll fix the shadow and the shading, and I'll fix the hand. I'm on school computer and teachers are watching, don't make sudden movements. I'll post an edit once I get it done. Thanks for the feedback, btw !

[Meloneeze.]

Thanks and sorry I haven't replied very soon, I had to go to worship all things learning a.k.a school Actually still at school, I will get these done as soon as I can. The buldge is his butt, will fix it Also, I'll fix the shadow and the shading, and I'll fix the hand. I'm on school computer and teachers are watching, don't make sudden movements. I'll post an edit once I get it done. Thanks for the feedback, btw !

Edit: I changed both hands to make them equal. I made the shading in an area lighter, and darkened certain points. Have I ever mentioned I don't use photoshop? So, it was incredibly hard to make it a lighter color, but I think I pulled it off. Also, if you have concerns let me know, I appreciate it!

Also, shadow is lighter. And I forgot to thank everybody, so thanks again Pfft, won't allow me to edit posts..