Oooooooooooooooooo god, I'm lookin forward to seeing how this turns out.![]()

Oooooooooooooooooo god, I'm lookin forward to seeing how this turns out.![]()
Haha. Part 2 tomorrow then you all have to rate and slate so I know what to include when I write Episode two![]()
Oh wow? You're writing them as you go along now? How on earth do you do that!?![]()
I think I'm loving these things too much![]()
Going to read now, will leave feedback afterwards!
EDIT: Fantastic, glad he came to his senses!!
Last edited by Slowpoke; 01-04-2008 at 02:11 PM.
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that's great. I think these are getting too great.wd!
Anything you'd like to see? Anything you'd like removed?
I want Danny's dad to turn up. Maybe he faked his own death or something to get out of a sticky situation? Danny needs a shoulder to cry on and his own father would be perfect!![]()
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