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    Ill write next chapter of Cosmo when youve wrote this one.

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    Chapter seven:

    Knock-knock. Then Tom's bedroom opened, Becky and Adele, Tom's sister. Walked in a plopped down on the bed. 'Tom, Becky's staying over in my room.' Adele said to her brother. 'Okay.' He replied smiling. 'Isn't there a gig at the Horse and Jokey later tonight?' Becky said to us. 'Yeah! Some of my mates are playing in there.' Tom said. 'It's at 8.' 'Well, It's half 7 now, so i'll have time to get ready.' I said. I put my hand down on the bed sheets. Tom was looking at Adele and Becky talking, and as he was doing so, he put his hand on mine, pretending he didn't mean to. That's Tom, he's so sweet.
    I ran over to my house and got some clothes and put them in a bag. And took them back to Tom's house. I searched through the bag, and got two bobbles and put hair pig tails in on each side. I dressed myself punky, and wore my pink and black converse. Tom wore his vans and ripped jeans with a t-shirt. I re-did my black eyeliner, while waiting for the other two girls. It was already dark, seeing as it was winter. And we walked up to the pub together. We nearly got to the top of the street, we passed the park.
    As we did so. We all heard a really loud scream. I jumped and grabbed Tom's hand. 'WHAT THE HELL WAS THAT?!' I whispered. 'I don't know... but it came from the park...' Tom said. We walked into the park. 'HELP ME!' We heard a girl's voice screaming again. 'HELP!!' I ran up... 'SAMMI!' I SCREAMED.

    TO BE CONTINUED - Soon, or later tonight.

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    OMG MORE OR -Gets out spork-

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    Quote Originally Posted by -Sunny.
    OMG MORE OR -Gets out spork-
    Dad wants to come on computer.
    Might be back afterwards.
    Might not, but i'll be on later tonight hun.
    Bye

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    Quote Originally Posted by Embean
    Dad wants to come on computer.
    Might be back afterwards.
    Might not, but i'll be on later tonight hun.
    Bye
    Ok Ive done other chapter of my story.

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    she is writing nxt chapter now
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    Chapter eight:

    At the hospital. I sat. And waited. While I was holding Tom's hand. Finally, the nurse came out of the room. 'Sammi has a servre injury in her hip.' She said to us. 'She was shot from an unknown area.' Tears started to stream down my eyes. 'We'll do a check on her, and a few operations, she'll be out in a few days.' The nurse finished, and walked off. I wiped the tears from my cheeks. Later that night. The 4 of us decided to go to the gig again, and tried to forget that anything happened. Tim, one of the guitatists from one of the bands was amazing! He played the bass really well. And it sounded so cool. 'Justine, your sweating to much...' Tom said to me as I was jumping. 'Your right, I'll take a break, I'm going to pop to the toilet.' I said to him, and pushed my way out of the crowd to the toilets. After the gig, Tom lead me out, and we found Becky and Adele again. We went back to their houses, and got some rest on the sofa. I switched over the channels, and turned over to 'Most Haunted' I leant onto Tom's shoulder and he placed his head on mine. 'We're gonna go and refill the sweets bowl.' Adele said, and she and Becky walked down the hall to the kitchen. I switched onto music, and put My Chemical Romance - I'm Not Okay (I Promise) on. Me and Tom LOVE that song. I got up and danced and danced. Once Ray's part on, i started headbanging. Then Tom turned me around, and without saying anything, he kissed me on the lips. Just as it happened... His mum walked in.

    To be continued - Later or tomorrow.

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    Dum Dum DUM!

    Moree or Ill poke you with a spork.

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    Briil story both of you
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    second part of chapter eight:

    She stared at us and smiled. Then left the room...


    Chapter nine:

    5 years on, and me and Tom are happily married.
    And best of all, we have a lovely house, and i'm pregnant.
    Sammi recovered and visits my house everyday.
    As for my mum, she lives a few miles away but I still get to see her.
    Becky is living with Hannah and Sammi.
    And they come over for daily visits.
    I'm having the baby in a few months time.
    And if its a girl we're thinking of calling it Poppy.
    And for a boy, Jake.
    But for now, I think i'll live a happy life, and keep an eye on whats around the corner.

    The end.
    Written by Emmy.

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