Selling hosting layout

[Jamie.]

Add 1px black borders and I'll give it 8/10.

George can do what he wants when he wants how he wants ;l

[SimplyTech]

Add 1px black borders and I'll give it 8/10.

defeats the point of a clean layout

[Flauvo]

I think Bondie has got a crush on Ozzie.

I wouldn't buy it for £6.50

I do affordable layouts at £1.00,£2.00,£3.00,£4.00,£5.00

For people who want clean layouts, and that are affordable.

[Exolution]

George can do what he wants when he wants how he wants ;l

Did I say he can't you thick minded bafoon?

I gave him a suggestion.

So shut up bondie the dumb blondie.
A clean layout is a layout that looks pro, and they should have a border.

[Jamie.]

I think Bondie has got a crush on Ozzie.

I wouldn't buy it for £6.50

I do affordable layouts at £1.00,£2.00,£3.00,£4.00,£5.00

For people who want clean layouts, and that are affordable.

You best watch ure mouth ;l and no ozzie if u didnt no is a boy (hard to belive lol) and i am a boy and no i aint gay before u say ;l i was sticking up for him coz im bored and hes a good mate ;l

Did I say he can't you thick minded bafoon?

I gave him a suggestion.

So shut up bondie the dumb blondie.
A clean layout is a layout that looks pro, and they should have a border.

And i think u will find i aint blonde and i aint thick minded bafoon ;l please go back to your cardboard box ;l

[Exolution]

What cardboard box? I am not in one, and I have not come out of one.

I think you are, I gave him an idea I think may improve it, and you jip other players lmao.

[Flauvo]

If your on a computer......
In a cardboard box......

That cardboard box would be massive.....


I WANT IT!

[Jamie.]

What cardboard box? I am not in one, and I have not come out of one.

I think you are, I gave him an idea I think may improve it, and you jip other players lmao.

*laughs* im laughing at u not with u ;l

[JoeComins]

If Joe was on then he'd probably write a 3 page essay on what is wrong with it.

Wow, You know me too well!

1. Monotone grey isnt veyr nice!
2. Wheres the banner? If that box above the plans is the banner, then atlewast make it look like it is!
3. The nav is ok, but the lnk sizes are too small!
4. You have the right idea to make the boxes colourful, but thats too vidrant, and they dont contrast very well!
5. A 1px black link at an opacity of just over the colour of your boxes will work better, and look cleaner than having none. It gives more definaition
6. It really annoys me when people use a canvas of less than 800 x 800
7. Its too small
8. Horrible for poeple will bigger screen resolutions!
9. You need to deffine the posistion of your banner. If you have it in the large grey box, where are you going to type? You could have that as a content box, but then it would look horrible without any images in the form of a banner!
10. Its dull, unattractive, and looks more like a prototype I do before startin a layout, only smaller. I usally make something like that pointing out where everything is, print it off and add annotations of colours, blending options etc for paying customers.
For myself, I just do as I feel!

8/10 for effort
3/10 for the template

I think your lacking colour, definition and style. Nohting jumps off at me and says BONDIES SITE, nor does it make me think, oo, bondies sites mine and clean

Its says, what effort really?

Sorry
Love ya reli

[Flauvo]

Joe, I love you.....r socks.

^^I agree, take hints. My layout is next to go in the bin bag