Laura is being a critique, rating your work. Which is what you wanted? Its best to know the bad points rather than the good pointsSo you can improve.
However, I think they are all awesome! +rep ;']

Laura is being a critique, rating your work. Which is what you wanted? Its best to know the bad points rather than the good pointsSo you can improve.
However, I think they are all awesome! +rep ;']
No more dreaming of the dead as the death itself was undone
No more crawling like a crow for a boy, for a body in the garden
No more dreaming like a girl so in love, so long
No more dreaming like a girl so in love, so long
Dreaming like a girl so in love with the wrong world.
love the kings
good if she said how i could improve...:rolleyes:
They look like you just put them all in photoshop in liquified them.. (the fat ones etc)
The others are okay but really simple. I can't give CC because I don't have a clue how too since I aint a pixerl artist.
6/10.
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