That's really very good. Well done.
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Well done, one tip, dont use so many short sentences, use a comma so the line elongates ^_^
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Originally Posted by FlyingJesus
A'ight cool, with that in mind then it's really rather good. One thing to watch out for is too much repetition - it's a good thing in small doses but having "he" or "Paul" at the start of each clause does make it a bit heavy on the brain
Ill take that into consideration
Thanks Originally Posted by blondie!
I did it for effect lol Originally Posted by Spherical
and thanks for the rep ^^
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Yah its good
(Didnt read it)
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Thats just pretty pointless then? Thanks anyway. Originally Posted by iluv2spam
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Nicee.
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thats great
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Very good.
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Thanks Originally Posted by Pl0x.
woo thanks ;] Originally Posted by Ealo
thats great
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Thank you ;]]] Originally Posted by Throne Sofa
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