So Simple But im So Proud x

[Scallz]

Its Simple but im proud as I made this from scratch and it dont look too bad XoXoX

here it is! (might be small and it is a png) :

Very good/very nice.

[rokgal]

Thanks to everyone who commented nicely or constructively but the only reason im proud is most of my work before i posted this was rubbish and so is this but as i only started in july id say ive improved from this piece of work to this (btw i just cant get the right colour :L ) !!!:

[Cheryl]

Please don't piss on peoples parades, EpicLoose.

Anyways, besides the simple errors you're slowly progressing which is great.

With time you will learn more about the feature of Ms Paint and how to use them to your advantage.

KEEP PIXELING!

Wow, a bit of irony highlighted there, EpicLoose? EpicFail on your behalf there.

OT: As someone has already said use a iso. grid for the windows.


Also for the second one, do you have any WIPs as it is much better and I believe the second one is ripped.

[,elaboratedolls]

too many dips. first thing I saw was the dip in the grass. :/ Really like your other one though

[Tintinnabulate]

Wow this one is much much betterand looked quite cool. Maybe add some windows, and graphics etc to the hotel building like the habbo one? These would make it look even nicer.

[.Devilish..]

I think its alrite. But you might want to work on your shading and line neatness a bit. Good try for a begginer.

[Nemo]

To the new one, perhaps try and add more smaller detaisl to it. Windows, a balcony etc.

[Jessicrawrr]

You really need to add detail to both of them, that's what it's lacking.