Some alts

[SackRace]

Your enlargements are brilliant Sam, lovely quality aswell! Good job

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[Samantha]

Thanks, they're not perfect though so anyways I can improve?

[Empired]

These are really nice Some of the enlarged ones are kinda grain-y :S was that just because they're enlarged?

Good job though!

[Kyle]

Will comment on what I can be bothered to. not much to fault in the furni enlargements as they're pretty straightforward and most are just a matter of making the lines longer.

pencil looks odd! more of a metallic cylinder with a pencil inside it. make the nib bigger so it actually looks like it's attached to the rest of the pencil rather than inside it and perhaps consider easing up on the amount of colours used.

weird blob heind ear and his right hand ( <- ) looks like more of a fin. other hand seems to somehow go under the lines of the top rather than over, probably could do with a darker shade on the inner arm. shoes are a bit of a mess, don't really look like the originals.

some blobs around chin and between feet. hair looks too... idk... liney? try dithering to get it looks more like hair.

again a few blobs between the feet and around the chin! hands look too lego.

hairband doesn't look finished. shoes are good, but tongues maybe aren't big enough. mouth looks sewn up too lol she looks like a character from the grinch. perhaps widen the lighter shade on the pigtails too to give them more depth.

another grinch style mouth. try bringing the lines above the mouth in line with the chin. looks like she has had some kind of breast removal operation too so try lowering that right hand line slightly to bring them into equillibrium. toes are the best ones you've done.

hair lacks shading but shoes are fab. four fingers on right hand but only three on the left? sort that out.

no shading on hair again sandals could do with a little touch up and mouth looks really weird, like he has a mouth full of something waiting to spit it out. also this guy has some weird moob flopping over his arm?

I know you've said you probably wouldn't do anything with this but I felt some of that needed pointing out!!! General advice for future if you ever decide to come back to this or start new ones is to always notice parts of your alts that look good and don't be afraid to reuse them to save time. hands, feet, shoes, hair - anything really - if you don't think it can be improved further then don't spend time redrawing it when you can just paste it on, nobody'll notice! Also if something doesn't look right/the same in the enlarged version then don't be afraid to change the lineart around a little. Keep at it, some really good work there Keep experimenting with eyes too, I'm sure you'll manage it eventually!!!

[Samantha]

@Kyle; Actually lolling at 'moob flopping over his arm.' I totally forgot I didn't do shading on that, I thought I did lmao!

Erm I think on the yellow one I might have thought that the 4th finger (the one nearest to the body) was the thumb like on the other hand if you get me? However I will take your CC on board and I'll try improve them.

Also the pencil I didn't create it was more of Laura behind it as it was a simple alt .

Thanks for the contrast in comments and I'll see what I can do !

[Hydroqen]

Hmm maybe it was this could have been Scarlet's .

Thats who that one is ! You speak to her anymore?

[Samantha]

Thats who that one is ! You speak to her anymore?

Nope, I forgot her Habbo name too wbu?

[Hydroqen]

Nope, I forgot her Habbo name too wbu?

it's Scase but she went to rs I think so i dont know

[Samantha]

Ah ok, thank you