Cadburys Machine

[Daltron]

awesome

[GregSegesi]

Looks good for a beginner! Keep up the good work :-)
Here's two tips to improve the alt and your future work:

• The writing on the side needs to be isometric. In other words, have it on an angle parallel to the angle the side appears. See how the bottom of the side goes 2 pixels long, down then right, 2 pixels long again? That is the angle of the side, so the writing on the side should follow the same rules. It's pretty hard to explain with words and I apologise if it's confusing but I can illustrate it if it's not entirely clear.
• The entire thing is pillow-shaded. I made this mistake when I started years ago and trust me, pixel art looks much better when shaded correctly. Pillow-shading is basically just going around all the edges and not shading in reference to a light source. Give this a read: http://www.natomic.com/hosted/marks/mpat/shading.html

Habbo pixel art is usually isometric, so keep that in mind. Sorry if I'm being too harsh, but if you can nail the two above things then your work will improve largely! :-D

[Cassiieee]

I actually like that. It's pretty smart. :L

[Brad]

Mmmm chocolate! Looks good. Better than what I could do.


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