Michaael's Alterations

[marine]

Amazing work, I especially like the 'zoomed in' ones.

[Sameer!]

OMG, I LOVE the twilight one!! +rep

[Accipiter]

K for the first one, the shading is quite terrible, on the ginger bread house the buscuit shading, just looks like the same colour dot scattered around, so 0 effort for that. on the roof the snow has absaloutly no 3d shading what so ever, the bends also seem to be done by the bending line tool on ms paint? :S WHY its the worst tool in the frigging world. The windows, yes they're suppose the look like icing but the black lines make it look like masking tape thats been pulled out within complications, if i were you i'd shade it with lighter shades at the top and remove the black lines, I'd say for the snow you'd need to shade the bottom of it a darker shade of grey and then atleast add some effort in the top bit. The candy seats? :S have obviously just been recoloured and placed there with no effort also, they arn't great but they arn't bad, the shading is on the wrong side for some reason to the light from the roof, that also brings up another thing to no light appreciation because there isn't a dark side on the right hand side of the building, but atleast you tryed something with the door, For the snow scattered around the floor, i believe you've used the thin confetti tool in paint.net after grabbing a certain area from the grey, not the best movie because, it doesn't look like thin lined snow :S. the corner on the side of the building (inwards facing corner) has also had no effort added to it, its a ginger bread house not a cardboard house so add some more edge to it.

Now onto the twilight one, i have to agree you've put alot more effort into this with the moving backgrounds, but when the man changes into the dog, why does he turn fully black with a few lines across his chest :S it kinda ruined the alt for me that you've made one frame that cheap. You should have added some sort of thin fur to it. You've put more effort into this one but you also seem to have lacked interest half way through.

The bear is quite simplistic which is no worries, it kinda does it good rather than having alot of shading, the dithering is nice but there does seem to be a lack of it especially on the feet. I'd say it'd be your best alt out of all these.

Enlargements, for an enlargement you have done pretty well, especially on the hair, but in some cases like the eyes and mouth you've lacked attention to it, now its been enlarged the mouths can have much more detail same for the eyes. the shading on the left hand glove could do with a fix up to.


On the port of habbo the only thing i'd point out that is bad is you could have tryed a bit better with the stairs, they're to wonky & you didn't seem to try for the plants in the water, which still shows a lack of interest in it, the shading here is nice but it does lack in some places, on the rocks you've done a good job, on the floors etc you could have added much more effect.

i don't really want to comment on your habboween one, the shading and detail is quite attrocious in some places, such as the lid the face the chairs pillow and the edge of the table cloth. for the human enlargements you've done much worse than you did on your archer.


For the paint brush, i'd be thinking this must be one of your first alts, so im gunna lay off on to harsh critisism but say the shading on the paint isn't 3d and the brushes look like wood.

the cake you made is nice, the only thing i could comment on is the edge of the plate, its to harsh on the eye and needs smoothing down.


I didn't do this for fun either, i done it because the thread lacks any c+c and is giving you pretty crap comments, if im truthful it doesn't really deserve elites compared to others that are in here, but that isn't my choice to make. Please take all of this in and don't throw it back at me because i'll be pretty pissed if i've just wasted my time trying to improve your alts & eventually your skills.

[valentineark]

Wow, I love the first one but even though your alts are in the "elite" section there still is room for improvement.
I personally think you should have shaded in the snow light blue or something to give it some sense of dimension, but that is just my opinion ;]

[Pebbles-Tiger]

Gingerbread house is best I think

All are wonderful though

[-Undiscovered]

These are really good!

[Dean]

The Twilight one is especially my favourite

[Fetes]

They are all amazing

[Samantha$]

omg myk! you really are good at alts the xmas gingerbread house is my fave, it's adorable.

i'd give constructive criticism if i could but, if i'm honest, i don't have the slightest clue when it comes to alts - they all look amazing to me. wd on elites section x

[Volumise]

aw some of them are pretty cute
good job