Can U Rap?

[Virgin Mary]

I could probably write a poem filled with racial slurs and which incites violence but I can't be bothered.

[Gangster]

I could probably write a poem filled with racial slurs and which incites violence but I can't be bothered.

i could aswell

[Gangster]

lmao got negged and the person said

crap rap brap. omg i can rhyme stuff hahahaha. yh, anyway, hi.

for the last time i know it sucks i put that at the bottom of my post

Edited by opensourcehost (Forum Super Moderator): Please do not multiple post.

[FlyingJesus]

As a rap fan, poet, lyricist and musician, that was really an insult to everything the genre tries to be. The fact that you use Lil Wayne (the most overrated rapper currently around) as your inspiration for lyrics says a lot really, and also you seemingly know nothing about rap yourself.

*Having an old JayZ album isn't old school - "Reasonable Doubt" was like mid 90s.
*Talking about being black doesn't make you a good rapper.
*This entire thread actually has nothing to do with your rap skill; it's your lyric writing that you've shown.
*Swearing only works where it's needed for force, it should be avoided where possible.
*Rap is not just about drugs, killing, gangs, guns, etc. Some of the best love songs are rap songs, and rap can cover any range of things.

If you want to see what real rap lyrics can look like, I'll be all too happy to post some of my own on request, but that's up to you. Please, grow up and learn something about the music before trying to copy a style from one artist.

[Jazza]

As a rap fan, poet, lyricist and musician, that was really an insult to everything the genre tries to be. The fact that you use Lil Wayne (the most overrated rapper currently around) as your inspiration for lyrics says a lot really, and also you seemingly know nothing about rap yourself.

*Having an old JayZ album isn't old school - "Reasonable Doubt" was like mid 90s.
*Talking about being black doesn't make you a good rapper.
*This entire thread actually has nothing to do with your rap skill; it's your lyric writing that you've shown.
*Swearing only works where it's needed for force, it should be avoided where possible.
*Rap is not just about drugs, killing, gangs, guns, etc. Some of the best love songs are rap songs, and rap can cover any range of things.

If you want to see what real rap lyrics can look like, I'll be all too happy to post some of my own on request, but that's up to you. Please, grow up and learn something about the music before trying to copy a style from one artist.

Epic +Rep

As loads of people said what you've got is not a rap, it's a collection of swear words split into lines showing very little (if any) talent. If you want to try making your own rap it would be best to start by listening to the sort of music that came out when rhythm and blues split into RnB and became a style of rap, people like Kool Herc.

[le harry]

View Poll Results: What do you think of my rap?
THE BEST! - 1 - 7.14%
Good - 1 - 7.14%
OK - 0 - 0%
IT ABSOLUTELY SUCKS - 12 - 85.71%
Voters: 14.

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LOL

[Soy]

Why would you even post this?
LOL

[niaux]

you suck case closed, and no im not going to _-rep you before you -rep me.

[Dan2nd]

Heres my rap:

y0 y0 y0

I am cool innitz
Tightening my rivets
listen a few minutes
is that my little Chivettes?

I know I iz cool
because I play habbo
but don't judge me y0
cos I iz a gansta to


awsome I know

[Saosin]

I can rap pretty well. Comes in handy around Christmas.