[Rk] - Just Married _ Sp September

[Rollerkingdom]

I hope not, ill be asking the host and see what he says btw i did a whole change with colors...

does it look better?

[Black_Apalachi]

No looks worse now. The chapel is an improvement though, but it needs to be in the picture completely. I think you need to lower the hill it's on so the whole building can be seen and then the cross needs to go on the steeple.

[Accipiter]

the chapel front is out of perspective, if the windows at the back face us then the front would also face < or \/ like a square you should just do a whole chapel behind them and turn that grass into marble.

[ExtraKen]

I hope not, ill be asking the host and see what he says btw i did a whole change with colors...

does it look better?

You kinda ruined your entry there. the chapel makes no sense thou like liam said the perspective is all wrong. I think OR you make a good background with the rite perspective OR you just leave it out because I do think it will be to much.

[Amberr]

Thats awesome well done xx

[Rollerkingdom]

No looks worse now. The chapel is an improvement though, but it needs to be in the picture completely. I think you need to lower the hill it's on so the whole building can be seen and then the cross needs to go on the steeple.

By it looks worse now you mean the grass color or the chapel?
what about the hair.. it's the color better?

[Rollerkingdom]

Mod please join them Thank you so much♥


Chapel better?

[Jamesy]

It looks a lot better now the church doesn't stand out so glaringly.
And you know it's within the rules to post again if you are adding information

The level of detail too is quite stunning, although where their shadow is seems to be without grass texture.

[Rollerkingdom]

It looks a lot better now the church doesn't stand out so glaringly.
And you know it's within the rules to post again if you are adding information

The level of detail too is quite stunning, although where their shadow is seems to be without grass texture.

Thank you.. ill see what i can with the the pathway texture.. maybe change to marble or something like it..
and you mean by posting like i did up there when i changed the church, it's okay to double post in that case.?

[Jamesy]

As long as it's adding information and past the editing time it's fine .

The grass is fine, but look where the shadow is under the people. It's just a plain colour rather than a darker version of the grass. Although this might be going OTT.