Soz about this post i ask Mrs.Mcall on habbo instead

Soz about this post i ask Mrs.Mcall on habbo instead
Last edited by .Liam; 22-06-2009 at 05:51 PM.
Liam asked me if I was going to write anything else after Teenage Lives.
My answer was I am going to take a break to focus on News and my new Habbox project that will be out soon then I will be back to write something a bit more realistic![]()
[A dressing room, Danny is trying on a tux behind a curtain and Serena is waiting for him]
Danny: Seriously? Married? What the hell are we thinking?
Serena: You can’t pull out now
Danny: Actually I can
Serena: Oh really?
Danny: You kinda need the groom
[Danny starts coughing]
Serena: Are you OK?
Danny: Yeah, fine
[We see Danny behind the curtain, there is blood on his hand from where he coughed. He wipes it away with a handkerchief]
Serena: Wow, you’re slow
Danny: Cancer!
Serena: Pregnant
Danny: Call it a draw
[He steps out from behind the curtain]
Serena: You look gorgeous
Danny: I know
Serena: OK, we’ll take it
Danny: Do I get to...
Serena: Nope
Danny: Thought so
Serena: Right, i’ll pay for this, you go to Chemo
Danny: OK, boss
Serena: Damn right
[She giggles as she walks up to the counter]
Serena: I’ll take this please and can I pay for the dress?
Cashier: Of course, delivered to the address you gave?
Serena: Please, i’ll try it on whilst he’s out
[The cashier smiles. Cut to the hospital. Danny isn’t on chemo but is sat in the doctor’s office]
Doctor: So you’re happy with the no chemo
Danny: Yes
Doctor: How have you been feeling?
Danny: Weak but i’m pulling through for this wedding
Doctor: I would still advise you to not take part in this wedding, the pressure is too much
Danny: I’ll decide what is too much, I am going to walk down that aisle not for me, but for Serena, for the only person who has ever supported me... the only person who ever truly loved me
Doctor: Does she know about what you’re about to sign
Danny: No
Doctor: I can’t force you but when signing a Do Not Resuscitate order, it has huge impact
Danny: I don’t want machines keeping me alive, no special measures
Doctor: Are you sure?
Danny: Just give me the form
[Danny signs the form, cut to the court where Sarah is signing a form]
Judge: You will be placed on probation for 3 years
Sarah: But apart from that?
Judge: You are free to go
[Sarah grins]
Sarah: Thank you
Lawyer: You’ll be sent the details about your probation office and such through the post, congratulations, you’re a free woman
Sarah: Thank you for all your help
Lawyer: Not a problem
Sarah: Will the murder charge be stricken off my record?
Lawyer: Yes
Sarah: Good
Lawyer: Have a nice life
Sarah: I intend on doing so
[Sarah exits the court. Sunlight hits her and she breathes in deeply. Danny exits the hospital but there is a limo at the end of the pathway. A window is rolled down]
Lionel: Daniel
Danny: Lionel?
Lionel: Get in, we have some things to discuss
[Danny gets in the limo and it drives on]
Danny: I have to say i’m surprised, how did you know I was here?
Lionel: I know everything, remember that
[Danny laughs]
Lionel: I also know you’ve signed a DNR
Danny: How?
Lionel: I told you... everything!
Danny: Please don’t tell Serena
Lionel: I won’t and I understand why you’ve kept it a secret but you have to tell her. She’ll be absolutely heartbroken
Danny: I can’t be a vegetable, living out my last days without knowing who is there... living on a machine
Lionel: How long do they think you have left?
Danny: Weeks
Lionel: I want you to know that Serena and the baby will be fine
Danny: Thank you
Lionel: At first I thought you were a cretin
Danny: Oh, lovely (!)
Lionel: BUT I came to realise that my daughter cares for you and you were there for her through a very hard time
Danny: And now she’s done the same
Lionel: Sexuality is a strange thing but love never changes. Gay, straight or whatever... love remains the same
Danny: Yeah, it does
Lionel: I love my daughter and I will love my grandchild and I will always make sure that the baby grows up knowing who its father is
Danny: That means a lot. I need you to do something for me too...
Lionel: Name it
Danny: Make sure she’s happy, make sure she moves on. I know what it is like to feel like you’ll never love again
Lionel: I’ll do my very best
Danny: Thank you
[The limo stops, Danny steps out. Lionel outstretches his hand]
Lionel: I will be very proud tomorrow giving her away to you
[Danny smiles]
Lionel: Go fetch a bag
Danny: What?
Lionel: You can’t see the bride!
Danny: Seriously?
Lionel: You need a bachelor party. I’ve told Serena all about it. She’ll be meeting Barbara later
Danny: Wow, you are organised
[Danny enters the flat, Serena is there]
Serena: I take it you’ve seen Daddy
Danny: He wants to do my..
Serena: Bachelor party, yeah
Danny: It’s a bit...
Serena: Weird, totally, but he’s on board
Danny: Well, enjoy your little party too
Serena: I will. Don’t worry, tomorrow we’ll be married and all this madness will be over
Danny: Be nice to get normal, be a family
[He touches Serena’s stomach and kisses her on the cheek]
Serena: Don’t go crazy!
Danny: I won’t
[He exits the flat. She looks out the window as the Limo pulls away. There is a knock on the door]
Serena: Yey, it’s here. Thank you
[She closes the door and opens up the sack. Her wedding dress is in it]
Serena: Oh, it’s beautiful... where’s the veil?
[Serena searches for it in the bag]
Serena: There’s always something
[She picks up the phone and dials a number]
Serena: Hi yeah, i’ve just gotten my dress but there is no veil... if you could send it right over, thanks
[Serena enters her room, we see clothes being thrown on the floor, she steps out the room and she is in her wedding dress. She looks stunning and grins happily. The dress trails along the floor. Serena gasps as she twirls, a tear in her eye. There’s a knock on the door. Serena opens it]
Serena: Hi..
[There is a thud as Serena lands on the floor. A foot is seen stepping over her. It is Sarah. With a knife in hand she drags Serena into the living room. She slams the door and locks it]
Sarah: I’ve been waiting for this for a long time
[Serena comes to and glares at Sarah, worried]
Sarah: You’ve had it easy for too long
Serena: Why are you here?
Sarah: I’m going to destroy you
[END]
I never expected Sarah to go see Serena and Danny with Lionel. That has been a massive shock to me. Now i cant wait till the next episode.
omg spoiler tags![]()
Sorry for lack of 'lives. Had laptop troubles. The penultimate (sp?) episode will be posted soon followed shortly by the special-length finale!![]()
[Sarah menacingly towers over Serena]
Serena: My mom will be here any moment
Sarah: You really thing Barbara is going to save the day?
Serena: How can you think you’ll get away with this?
Sarah: Because I’m not like Ed... I don’t screw things up... you’re going to pay
Serena: For WHAT? Winning? For being prettier than you? For people liking me?!
Sarah: FOR RUINING EVERYTHING, YOU’VE MANIPULATED EVERYONE AGAINST ME
Serena: You lost everyone because of the way you were
Sarah: You stole Danny
Serena: I LOVE DANNY
Sarah: I LOVE HIM TOO, I LOVED HIM FIRST
Serena: I’m going to be marrying him tomorrow
Sarah: I don’t think so
[Sarah kicks down Serena and goes towards her handbag, she takes out her phone. Cut to a limo and Barbara is with a bunch of people. Her phone beeps, she opens a text]
Barbara: “Sorry Mom, not feeling up to big party. I am fine just want to reflect on my own”. She’s matured so much
Friend: What about the party?
Barbara: Who says we can’t have one in her honour
[They all laugh as the scene cuts to Sarah closing the phone]
Sarah: Don’t you love technology? There is no Mom in shining armour
Serena: There’s always Danny
Sarah: He’s with your Father, Serena, you have nowhere to go
Serena: What are you going to do huh? Why are you here? Are you here to frighten me? Because YOU DON’T. Danny dying, frightens me... having this baby alone frightens me... but you don’t frighten me, I PITY you
Sarah: Save the psychobabble
Serena: I know you’re pathetic but are you really going to harm an unborn child
Sarah: That baby doesn’t deserve a mother like you
Serena: And you’d be a better one?
[Serena pulls herself up]
Serena: I have news for you Sarah, I’m not weak
[Serena slaps Sarah and runs towards the door, Sarah jumps and grabs her ankle and Serena falls. The shot shows Danny falling too]
Lionel: DANNY BOY!
[Danny gets back up]
Danny: I WON! I WON!
[There is a casino set up]
Lionel: See? I told you that you didn’t want to miss out
Danny: This is the best night ever, I best call Serena
Lionel: She’s with Barbara, leave her be
Danny: Yeah but still...
Lionel: Daniel!
[He takes Danny’s phone and puts it away
Danny: Who’s for blackjack?
Lionel: Atta boy!
[Lionel puts his arm around Danny. Cut to the flat and Serena is writhing in pain]
Serena: Ahh! The baby... please...
Sarah: Not nice to feel so submissive, is it?
Serena: I need to go to the hospital
Sarah: You need to be quiet
Serena: Why?
Sarah: Whilst I decide what to do with you
[It is now dark outside and Sarah walks up to Serena]
Sarah: Sleep tight
[Sarah slams her foot into Serena’s face. Cut to the morning and Danny is at the Mansion getting ready, Lionel walks in]
Lionel: Quite the night, eh?
[Danny turns around, he’s pale and sweating]
Danny: Yeah, don’t think I’ve gotten over it yet
Lionel: Are you OK?
Danny: Yeah just, big night...
Lionel: Big Day!
Danny: Yeah
Lionel: Thank you for making her happy
Danny: Thank you for your blessing, I know it means a lot to Serena
Lionel: Walking her down that aisle will be reward enough for me
Danny: Yeah, she’ll look beautiful
Lionel: I’ll leave you to it
[Lionel closes the door, the shot changes to Sarah in the darkened flat. Serena is slumped against the wall, holding her stomach]
Serena: Sarah, please, you hate me... not the baby
Sarah: You are the baby... a constant reminder
Serena: It’s a child, Sarah, it hasn’t done anything
Sarah: Oh shut up
Serena: Let me go and I’ll say nothing
Sarah: Because you’re so trustworthy (!)
Serena: I promise
Sarah: Your promises mean nothing!
Serena: We used to be friends, I know you’re not evil, you’re not your brother
Sarah: DON’T MENTION HIM
Serena: You’ve had it tough, what happened to your parents...
Sarah: I mean it..
Serena: He killed them
[Sarah launches at Serena, her eyes wild and a knife in her hand]
Sarah: I WILL CUT YOU OPEN FROM TOP TO BOTTOM IF YOU DON’T SHUT YOUR MOUTH
Serena: Ok... but, Sarah, when they find out I’m not at the wedding... they’ll come find me
Sarah: I sent another text
Serena: They’re not stupid
Sarah: You’re right, this’ll have to be quick
Serena: No..
[Sarah advances on Serena, who tries to scuffle away. Cut to the church]
Vicar: We’ll be ready to start in 30 minutes
Lionel: How you feeling?
Danny: Nervous, strangely
Lionel: Not getting cold feet
Danny: I don’t have cold anything
Lionel: It is warm in here, can we get a fan please?
Vicar: I’ll see what I can do
[Vicar exits]
Lionel: We can postpone it, you know
Danny: No! I am fine
Lionel: No point risking your health
Danny: What health?
Lionel: You’re still here
Danny: Not for long, I want this over and done with... I mean that nicely
Lionel: I understand, I’ll go call Barbara
[Lionel exits, Barbara is in the main church hall]
Lionel: Why aren’t you with Serena?
Barbara: She said she wanted to make her own way
Lionel: On her wedding day?
Barbara: Our daughter is hardly conventional, Lionel
Lionel: True, I can’t believe this is happening
Barbara: It makes her happy
Lionel: That’s all I ask
Barbara: Shall I let the guests in?
Lionel: Yes, I’ll tell Daniel she’s on her way
[Lionel goes back into the church hall, Danny stumbles]
Lionel: Woah, are you OK?
Danny: Yeah, I got a bit of Déjàvu there for a second
Lionel: Of what?
Danny: Long story
Lionel: Aren’t they all! The guest will be here soon, start in 10 minutes
[Lionel exits and Danny sits down, breathing heavy. Cut to the flat. Sarah has Serena in a grip against the wall]
Serena: LET ME GO
Sarah: NO
Serena: GET OFF ME!
[Serena kicks Sarah and runs but Sarah catches her once more and Serena cries]
Serena: Please!
Sarah: How do you like feeling helpless?
Serena: I’m sorry for everything that happened to you but please... LET ME GO
Sarah: NO!
[Sarah lashes out, her fist strikes Serena who stumbles against the wall and the scene cuts to the church once more. Danny is at the alter]
Lionel: Danny?
Danny: Hmm?
Lionel: Are you OK?
[Danny stumbles once more, cut to the flat]
Serena: PLEASE, LET ME GO, YOU’RE BETTER THAN THIS
Sarah: I’LL STEAL FROM YOU WHAT YOU STOLE FROM ME
Serena: YOU DON’T DESERVE DANNY
[Sarah drives the knife into Serena’s stomach. Serena’s eyes latch onto Sarah’s. Cut to church]
Lionel: Danny?
[Danny falls forward, collapsing on the floor. His eyes roll to the back of his head. Serena’s body replaces him in the flat, blood surrounds her]
Sarah: I warned you!
[Sarah runs away as we cut to the church and Danny is surrounded by people]
Lionel: Call an ambulance!
[Danny and Serena’s bodies are visable]
[END]
Enjoy! Sorry about font.
Last edited by Mrs.McCall; 03-07-2009 at 06:20 PM.
Is that the last one?, I found it amazing how u gripped me in to reading the whole series, I love your work +rep. I did not expect Danny and Serena to die. Now what is going to happen Sarah maybe goes and see Lionel and tell her that she killed Serena. It is just too much for me to handle.
Second to last one.Is that the last one?, I found it amazing how u gripped me in to reading the whole series, I love your work +rep. I did not expect Danny and Serena to die. Now what is going to happen Sarah maybe goes and see Lionel and tell her that she killed Serena. It is just too much for me to handle.
Finale will be posted soon! Then that's it
And thanks for the comments.
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