Well i know it isnt very good but its a start , C&C on how to improve it please
[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/d6975350db.png[/IMG]
Well i know it isnt very good but its a start , C&C on how to improve it please
[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/d6975350db.png[/IMG]
I quite like it but add abit more color, blue and white are the common colors lately ;D
Hey,
You definatly have great potential; the style is almost there and at least you have a sense of colour unlike some first-timers.
One flaw is the size of the layout - it practically makes it... impractical?
Nice one for a WIP though, well done - +rep.
-Adam.
Adam you smell + rep ;o
Also repppppage for you too --ss--2 ;D
Edit: Must spread Adam
Nice Sean =]
Its awesome for a first, just needs to be bigger =]
Very good so far for your first template.
Here are some ideas I've thought of in which you might be able to improve the layout.
For the marquee, try and use some more colour and shading. For example a nice image like this: [IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/c9c930485a.png[/IMG] (Repeated -x)
Might look better than just being white ([IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/a5ab290871.png[/IMG])
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Another way in which you may be able to improve the layout is if you really want to use the colour white on the navigation, etc.
Then try to add some small amounts of shading for example like this:
[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/0c8cbd3e28.png[/IMG]
You would be suprised at how much better it looks!
Ya fairly well done for your first one! Some suggestions though:
-Indent the "sub-links" and drop the lines to them
-Make it bigger(wider) as Dentafrice already said
-At the bottom of your giant sticky note you have a line that just sits there in the bottom right hand corner, its unecessary
But generally very well done +rep!
Nice, follow the advise above and you'll fly throo!
drink up this bottle of yeah
and P A I N T your body on me
I tried to keep it a bit small as i dont like layouts / sites that strech out too much :p
But i'll try to make the enxt a bit bigger
Its Shane*
kk i'll try :p
Thanks , very helpful +repVery good so far for your first template.
Here are some ideas I've thought of in which you might be able to improve the layout.
For the marquee, try and use some more colour and shading. For example a nice image like this: [IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/c9c930485a.png[/IMG] (Repeated -x)
Might look better than just being white ([IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/a5ab290871.png[/IMG])
--
Another way in which you may be able to improve the layout is if you really want to use the colour white on the navigation, etc.
Then try to add some small amounts of shading for example like this:
[IMG]http://www.****************/uploads/0c8cbd3e28.png[/IMG]
You would be suprised at how much better it looks!
I forgot to draw the borders around the whole template as when i was viewing it on paint it already had a border :pYa fairly well done for your first one! Some suggestions though:
-Indent the "sub-links" and drop the lines to them
-Make it bigger(wider) as Dentafrice already said
-At the bottom of your giant sticky note you have a line that just sits there in the bottom right hand corner, its unecessary
But generally very well done +rep!
I will keep practising and thanks for the advice
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