Poem-The Silent Hole of Darkness

[Simonac55]

Well I said I would post one of my poem on here so here it goes:

As a tear roll from sadness,
I felt into the hole of darkness.
Death was everywhere, stole a thing,
As I thought I had lost everything.

As I made one step, I was affraid,
I was in that hole, my choice was made,
Darkness became a part of my soul,
The thing eating it was the hole.

All I saw was black and couldn't see a thing,
I thought my heart was empty of this feeling,
As confusion rested in my head, running,
Death was approaching.

As I left myself fall into this darkened water,
I thought death didn't matter.
As I was falling deeper and deeper,
It became darker and darker.

I had almost came to my end,
As death finishing her work, feelings ben.
But then I saw a hand full of gracem
Defeating death, as I saw her face.

This feeling was retrieved,
And as I became older I believed,
That as I just look in her eyes, deeper,
I know that she brang me higher.

[Pulchritudinous]

Thats wonderful, go you

[Ciaran]

amazing well done... mine are kinda like that wid all darkness lol but i only writ em when i was annoyed, ive been happy lately so i havent been able to write how scary,,, hehe

[Pulchritudinous]

Write a happy poem then Ciaran

[Ciaran]

lol thats the scary part... i cant!!!

[Simonac55]

I know it's pretty hard to write a happy poem for me too because I write to get out what is in my mind and what is bugging me.