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Emicat
20-10-2005, 04:21 PM
PG13 - contains mild Whisle-whisle content, violence and swearing (No, it doesn't get that bad - you baby)

Lisa was a simple 16 year old. She didn't have lots of friends, only two. Jess and Toni. Ever since first year at secondary, Lisa had fancied Jack. He was so cute, and atheletic.
Lisa walked into "Stockton Secondary School" and sat on the benches near the gates.
"Wow. This school is so small..." she said to Jess.
"You seen Toni? She's got a lip-ring!" Jess happily replied
"Damnit. She copied me again."
Sonn enough, Toni bounced through the school gates with her black hair bouncing with her. Lisa glared at her hair and lip-ring. "She wants to be me so much. I'm begining to hate her" She thought.
"HIYA!! Wanta ciggie? Oh my god you know what happened? You know Ben? Well he asked me out and I was like EWW and then..."
"God she just goes on and on" Lisa whispered to Jess.
"I know, I don't know how she can breathe!" Jess giggled.

Everyone pilled into science after registraision. Lisa fiddled with her lip-ring and saw that Toni looked at her, and laughed every now and then.
"Hey, can I sit here?" Jack ran in just before the bell. Lisa was too busy spitting at Toni to realise who it was sitting next to her "Oh yeah, sure whatever..."

"LISA!! PAY ATTENTION!" Mr. Sittion screamed. Lisa acctually realised she'd been staring at Jack for 10 minuites and he had been staring back.
"Lisa? Are you feeling ok..."
"Yeah! Hehe yeah I feel fine! Hehehehe... sh*t..."
Lisa dropped a purple pencil on the floor, and she bent down to get it and...

TO BE CONTINUED!!!1!

Addie
20-10-2005, 05:08 PM
Yey! More more more.... 10/10m but MORE MORE MORE :D

Emicat
20-10-2005, 06:35 PM
Lisa dropped a purple pencil on the floor, and she bent down to get it and SMACK.
"You have a lovely A*S!" Jack shouted loudly. Lisa picked up her pencil and sat down quietly. Does he like me? Lisa thought. Jack always had known she'd fancied him - but he always did act like a year 7...
"JACK! STOP THAT FOOLISH ACT AND GET ON WITH YOUR WORK!"
"Ok Mr Sitty-on-it" Jack smirked.
Lisa gave a sort of nervous laugh that sounded like train.
"Ha-ha-ha-ha...!"

Break arrived. Everyone rushed to the door, and Lisa was burning with anger as Toni flirted with Jack. "She KNOWS I like him! Why would she do that?!" She screamed at Jess.
"Take it EEEZEE!" Jess sighed "You know she wants to be you. In year 9 she dyed her hair black like you, and now the lip-ring? Pl-ease!"
Lisa laughed and pulled a lose piece of hair behind her ear. Jack came after her "Mcdonald! Mcdonald! KFC and a pizza hut!" he screeched at a small ginger boy in the yard. Poor kid, his inials were KFC. Soon enough, Jack was squarking and pecking at this lil lad.
"Hey! Why are you doing that?" Lisa shouted. Jack bared his braces at Lisa. "Oh look who it is. The goth! Blo*dy goody two shoes! Goth the time?!"
"Chav a watch??" Lisa replied. She had heard them all before. "Most chavs can't even spell goth" She smiled at Jess. "Yer we can. Its G-O-G-H!"
Lisa sighed "Chavs..." and walked up to art cause the bell had rung.

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111111111111111111. ..................1..

Addie
20-10-2005, 08:31 PM
And that is 11/10 Moree :D

Emicat
23-10-2005, 03:22 PM
Art always s*cks in Lisa's school. They get to draw flowers and DOORS AND WINDOWS!
"Goddamn this cr*p art stu-pido!" Lisa whinned.
"Aye. Soooooooo boring and the Teacher looks as bad as this place!" Jess complained.
"Am I? Oh what a shame. Maybe you would like to stay behind to apheresiate going to school and wasting time like I have to everyday!" Mrs Niall screamed.
"Erm, no not really, no!" Jess screamed back.
The teacher sighed, and turned to hand out books.
Prod. Prod. Prod. "Hey, quit it!" Lisa moaned. Toni was poking her in the back with a pencil.
"Make me b*tch!" Toni grinned. "Some friend" Lisa sighed. Stools screached across the floor and muttering began. Suddenly the Art Studio door slammed against the wall and there stood Lisa's boyfriend, Tom.
"Sorry I'm late miss but I couldn't be a*sed to go to Science so I skipped it." Lisa had forgotten all about him. "I thought you were going to meet me at the corner shop!" Tom cried to Lisa as he sat next to her. "I'm sorry hun, I forgot all about you." Lisa apollogized to Tom and kissed him politely on the lips. Yet that kiss ended up as a full-on passonate snog right in the middle of Art.
"A-hem. Do you two mind?" was just possible to hear through the wolf whistles and Get a room!'s. Lisa blushed as she kissed him. She pushed her hands through his long black hair. "I love this dude so much" Lisa thought.
Quite weirdly - she saw Jess glaring at her. Did she fancy Tom? "I love you Lise - but why is Jess staring?" Tom whispered. "I don't know. I'll talk to her next lesson".

The bell rang loudy and a mosh pit formed outside the classroom. Lisa linked Jess and Tom to walk up to PE.
"God art couldn't be eciting even if it was taught by Gerard Way in a G-string!" Lisa giggled. Tom put his arm around her and kissed her head. Tom was quite tall for his age. He towered over Lisa and could get alcohol from ASDA. Jess pulled them apart.
"Public display of affection is a no-no!" Jess muttered at them.

In the changing rooms, Lisa pulled Jess to one side.
"Do you fancy Tom? Cause I'm sick of you staring at..."
"NO" Jess shouted. "I don't like lads! I'm.. erm..."
Jess cupped Lisa's face in her hands. "Gay" And then she paissonetly kissed Lisa. She tryed to pull away from Jess, but she was so strong. Then Lisa blacked out after a sharp pain in her arm.

"What the-" Lisa awoke in the Cleaner's room. Her clothes were no where to be seen. She quickly grabbed a towel and glanced at her arm. There was a needle hole. "HELP Someone help me I'm locked in here please help me please!!! Let me out please! Jess attacked me please please!"

Lisa openned her eyes. She was lying on the changing room floor. Everyone was starring at her. Even Tom had put his head around the changing room door.

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!1

Addie
23-10-2005, 03:59 PM
Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 1000/10 That was omg. and omg MORE!

Reeceykins
23-10-2005, 04:35 PM
Wow, Thats a pretty good story. :)

Emicat
23-10-2005, 07:02 PM
Thats what you think, but its NOT over yet!

"Lisa I'm-"
"ITS OK!! Hehehehe..." Lisa started rocking back and forward. "Its ok. She won't touch you. Its ok. She won't touch you..." She kept telling herself.

Lisa was excused from PE as she fell and hit her head.
"HEREEES TOMMY!" Tom shouted as he sat next to Lisa at lunch.
"Oh, hi Tom..." Lisa quivered. "I saw you having a nervous break down, what’s up?" Lisa was asked. She tried to speak yet no words came out. Tom hugged her "Its ok, whatever happens I'll look after you. Unless something happens to me. Then its your turn!" Tom giggled. Lisa was just happy to be with him. She pulled away and started munching on a sandwich. They were sitting on the benches near the gates. "You wanna go and get something to eat Lise?" she nodded and put her lunch back in her bag. Tom pulled her up and they walked out the gates hand in hand.

"Where shall we go? McDonalds or Bugerking?" Tom asked.
"McDonalds please. I wanna happy meal!" Lisa grinned. They pushed the doors and walked in the deserted resturant. She sat at a table while he got their food. Lisa played with a straw and Tom sat next to her. "You know Lisa, I really love you..." "I muve you moo" Lisa mumbled through a mouth full of Fries and Cheese Buger. She swallowed and kissed Tom on the nose. He and Lisa hugged. "I think we should get going and we'll eat our stuff on the way back, kay?" Lisa said. "Yer, ok hun".

They walked back, through the woods. Lisa's head swelled with memories. After all, this was where they first met. She glanced around, she saw "TOM 4 LISE" on a tree, and the place where they first kissed. The campfire spot, right under the stars. At night it was surreal and beautiful.
"Remember this Tom?" Lisa beamed. He nodded and smiled - he was halfway through his Chicken Nuggets. He put his arm around Lisa kissed her on the lips. They started kissing.

Bang.

Tom and lisa jumped startled and confused. A bullet hit the tree, right in the "4".
"LETS GO!" Tom screamed. They ran through the hedges and through the flowers. They got through the school gates. Puffing and moaning they collasped into each others arms.
"Thank god - honey I love you soo much." Lisa puffed. "I love you with all my heat, oh heart! Handwriting!" Tom smiled, inhailing fast. Tom loved Little Britain so much - he'd say the catchphrases at the most awquard moments. "Hey Toni! You seen Jess?" Tom shouted. "Nah, I saw her with Jack before, but that was at the start of lun-"
The bell rung. Time for forum room.

TO BE CONTINUED...

Addie
23-10-2005, 07:10 PM
See you can join me and xhannx in the writing department :D and CursedHeart

Emicat
23-10-2005, 07:18 PM
What the hell is that? :/ lol :p

Addie
23-10-2005, 07:21 PM
what the -Im not saying- is what?

Emicat
23-10-2005, 07:58 PM
Doesn't matter hun ;)

Anyway, on with the story,

*cough* a-heeem.

All the way through Maths and English, Lisa was paraniod. Also, it was October so it was darker than it usually is at 3;20. Jess didn't talk to her. It was such a shame, they'd been friends for years. Lisa gazed out the window at the woods. Across the trees, was a large hole.
"Thats our spot and now I'm afraid to go there." She mummured to herself.
"What did you say s*xy? I MEAN LISA, Lisa... Lise... Lise?!?" Jess sobbed quietly. "Hey - where were you at lunch??" Lisa questioned "Toni said she saw you with Jack..." "We went to grab a bite at McDonalds, why?" Jess snapped. "Nothing, just wondering..." Lisa reasured.

"Hiya Lise, will you walk home with me? Just the thing at lunch crepped me out a hell of a lot and I feel really safe with you..." Tom admitted walking with her out of the English department. "Sure Tom" She mummured "I'm freaked out too!". They pulled off their blazers - Lisa was wearing a Red Green Day shirt and Tom was wearing a Adrenie Records workshirt. Toni ran past with the exact same shirt on as Lisa. "What a cow... she copies everything you do. Its pathetic!" Tom growled. Toni jumped on her bus and, obivously, heard what Tom has said. She stuck her middle finger up at them while the bus drove away.

"Jess seems to be doing alot of disappearing today..." Lisa sighed. "Y'a think? Bl**dy sl*ts these days..." Tom snorted.
"Oh don't be mean! Maybe she's on a date with..." Lisa remembered what had happened in PE. "No. She's gay Lisa! She wouldn't!" Lisa screamed at herself .
"Erm, Lisa are you oh..."
"Yah!! Haha never better!!"
"What did she do to you?"
Lisa collasped into his arms "She kissed me. Full on and I just blacked out" She sobbed through salty, black tears. Tom cupped her face in his hands. He brushed her hair with his fingers. "I've told you I'll always be here for you. I love you. I don't fancy you I love you. Always have, always will." "I hate it when you give me speaches!" Lisa sniffed. They hugged and shadows emerged.

"TOM! LOOK!" Lisa screamed, and Tom turned around.
"Lise, there trees." Tom admitted "You've had a tough day, I want you to have a nice sleep and rest your head. That or we can get drunk." Tom giggled. His giggle was so cute, like a kitten purring and a dog barking at the same time. "All I want is to be with you." Lisa ordered. "I'll talk to you on MSN aight Lise?" Tom said. "Kay hun. I love you" Lisa smiled at him. They passionetly kissed for about 15 minutes and since there was only two houses inbetween them, they could walk home together.

Tom walked Lisa to her house's door.
"MSN tis' then" Tom grinned.
"MSN it is." Lisa kissed him on the lips yet suddenly...

I finished for today ;) TO BE CONTINUED!

Addie
23-10-2005, 09:01 PM
JESS COMES WITH A MACHINE GUN BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Lol. 100/100 Can't wait for next chapter. (Please dont llet Jess come with a machine gun;)

Emicat
24-10-2005, 12:34 PM
...Lisa's father came to the door with bunny slippers and a toothbrush sticking out his mouth.
"Leca! Cun en! Heya om!" he exclamed, and turned back to the bathroom.
"Oh...kay.." Tom smirked.
"Sorry, bout dat. I'll see you later!" Lisa hurried him out of the gate.
She walked into her front room. Lisa studied the DVD collection as her parents left.
"We'll be home at midnight, ok hun?" Her mother imformed, straighting Lisa's father's tie. "Yeah.. ok.. bye..." Lisa mumbled as the front door closed. She put a Trivium CD on and got her laptop out. "Home sweet home" she thought. She sat on the sofa and started eating a chocolate bar. Her face twisted as she realised she was eating her dog's bone. "URGH!" She screamed, jumping up. Soon, her puppy, Zero, wandered in. She through the bone to him and sat back down on the sofa. "Do do da duh" her laptop beeped. Tom was talking to her on MSN.

------------------------------------------------
HEREEEEESSS TOMMMIEH!!! says:
Hiya <3

HEREEEEESSS TOMMMIEH!!! says:
You there?

[!$A says:
Yah. How are yah?

HEREEEEESSS TOMMMIEH!!! says:
Ok, you?
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Suddenly, all the electricy failed. Her laptop screen went black, and her CD choked. Her dog started barking at the window. Shadows emerged. Lisa screamed. Lisa cried. Rocks flew into the windows, shouting was heard. She past out with the noise of her dog whinning and glass smashing.

"Wha... where am I?!?"

Addie
24-10-2005, 12:56 PM
::O Cant wait till next chapter. Your a good story writer btw,

Emicat
24-10-2005, 02:42 PM
Thanks :p

Emicat
24-10-2005, 02:59 PM
Cellotape was stuck across her mouth. She looked around - she was in some sort of shed. Tears fell to her ripped pink and black socks.
"Why me." Lisa thought. She tried to move her arms yet they were tied to the chair she was sitting on. "Why me" was reapeting over and over again. "MMMM! MM MMMM!!!" Lisa moaned. A hot, aclcohol drenched breath came onto her cheeks, drying her tears violently
"Whats wrong Lisa? Copying me again?".

Will she survive? Or will she fail? Tune in when I can be bothered to finish! Hehe...

Addie
24-10-2005, 03:16 PM
Lmao. I think its JESS!"

Addie
24-10-2005, 03:16 PM
Sorry for double posting clicked 2wice////

Emicat
24-10-2005, 03:20 PM
I'M GONNA KILL YOU FOR YOUR SIG SO MEEEH

Lol :p

Addie
24-10-2005, 03:21 PM
Aghhhhhhh....... Stace made it.

Emicat
24-10-2005, 08:30 PM
On with the story...

Pain scoarched across Lisa's face as the tape was ripped off.
"WHY ARE YOU DOING THIS?" Lisa cried.
"Because - you do not deserve a perfect life." Their hood was taken down - Toni was under it. "I'm homeless. I have no parents. No boyfriend. No support. And you. Your life is perfect! And you look down on me. I NEED your life." Toni wailed with anger as she slapped Lisa across her face. "I'm becoming you. Ever since year 7, you were so popular it was so strange. And me, I was ignored. Now I look exactly like you, and I am still ignored. So I'm getting rid of you. I'm in your place. I'm you." She spoke with a hint of evil. "Please - LEAVE ME ALONE!! Please Toni don't hurt me - My life isn't perfect! I'm paranoid! I live in fear!!" Lisa screamed. "Who's Toni?" Toni replied, with a puzzled look. "The only person here is me, Lisa.". Toni kicked Lisa in her mouth, causing blood to pour. "Pwease 'Lisa'. If ywou are mwe, why are you bweating up ywourself.?" Lisa cried. Her eyeliner was stinging her cuts. "You are my imagingation. I am not hurting anyone." Toni glared. Lisa remembered she had her dog's bone in her jumper pocket - she had picked it back up when she had fainted. Lisa threw it at Toni, knocking her to the floor. Then Lisa ran. Ran threw the door. Ran threw the forest. Ran threw the openning. Ran to Toms home.

"TOM! TOM! TOM! PLEASE HELP ME PLEASE!" Lisa screamed. No answer. "TOM!?!?" She pleaded "PLEASE Open...." Lisa heard the noise of a car. A DeLoren drove past. With Tom screaming threw tape at her in the back seat, tears streaming down his face.

TO BE... CONTINUED!!!

Addie
24-10-2005, 08:44 PM
:O Yeyyeyeye morey!

Emicat
25-10-2005, 04:40 PM
"TOM!!" Oh-h My go-ha-od...." Lisa fell to her knees. Her hands were still tied together with wire. It felt like her hands were going to fall off. Then an idea stuck her mind. She banged her feet on the floor. "Harder...harder.." she screamed at herself. Eventualy, two little wheels popped out the bottom of her soles. Lisa clambered to her feet and skated madly after the car. "TOM! I'M COMING FOR YOU!" she screamed at the DeLoren. A muffled "Horray" came after. Lisa wriggled her hands free. She grabbed onto the back of the car. The car slowed at the side of a busy road. The driver of the car stepped out, their head was covered with black cloths and different materials. Tom rolled out the car. They looked up, electric green eyes starring in fear. "Who are you... why do you have my friend...?" Lisa moaned. "I'm sorry..." a familiar voice sobbed. "...but this is for us" they pulled a gun out and held it at Tom's head. "LIFA!!"" Tom screamed.
"Please don't shoot him!" Lisa pleaded. " At least let me know who you are!"

Addie
25-10-2005, 05:35 PM
:O no! Tom!!!!!!!!!!!

Emicat
26-10-2005, 09:19 PM
"I'm your girlfriend." The voice replied.
"Oh my god - not you Jess!" Lisa wept. "Please don't hurt him!". "You've been cheating on me. Why have you been cheating on me." Jess glared at Tom. "What a scumbag." Jess smirked. "If you hurt him, I'm leaving you." Lisa spoke sturnly. Jess threw her gun down. "You wouldn't!" Jess screamed. "I would and will" Lisa replied walking up to her slowly. "You love me. I love you. Why would you." Jess paniced. "BECAUSE I HATE YOU!" Lisa screamed, throwing the gun at Jess's head. Jess fell and passed out. Evil laughter filled the air from a near by bush. "Who's there??" Lisa cried. Her mobile beeped. She had got a text. It said; "Your wrost ngihtmaar!". It could only be one person. "Jack?" Lisa shouted. "Jwack?" Tom mumbled through his tape. Lisa bent down and pulled it off his mouth. "Thanks babe - I owe you one." Tom huffed. He was sweating so much. Lisa kissed him softly on his lips. She aproached the bush, with her arm out ready to part the bush. She grabbed the shrub, pulled it, and let out a horrified scream.

Addie
26-10-2005, 09:59 PM
Dum DUm DUM!

Emicat
06-11-2005, 02:42 PM
Jack was behind the bush. His wrists had been slit. He was lying there motionlessly in a pool of his own blood. A mobile in his hand. Lisa back away and tripped over a box.
"Lisa! Whats up?" Tom hoped over to her - his legs were tied together. She picked up the box.

kasi
06-11-2005, 04:02 PM
:o i just started reading this.

write more ^_^

Frank459
06-11-2005, 04:41 PM
write more you little rat :(

Emicat
06-11-2005, 04:45 PM
write more you little rat :(

Is there any need for that? :(

The start of the story is on the first page - if you want to read that... or call me some sort of vermin again...

Frank459
06-11-2005, 04:58 PM
i did read it and my comment was meant to mean - write more Its great!
there was no need to get upset :(

Addie
06-11-2005, 06:09 PM
Hey thats good :) BUt too short.

kasi
11-11-2005, 02:13 AM
write more pleasee.

Emicat
11-11-2005, 07:55 PM
"I think Jack is dead" She mumered - so upset to show any emotion.
"Come here" Tom welcomed her into his arms. He kissed her forehead gently.
"I love you so much" Lisa cried. She stopped hugging opened the box. There were photos and CD's. She picked up a photo. Nothing could had prepared her for what was on it.

It was her. She was in her bedroom. Sleeping.

Addie
11-11-2005, 10:10 PM
:o; Can you do longer?

Embean
12-11-2005, 03:44 PM
I need moreeee.

Emicat
12-11-2005, 04:15 PM
I didn't realise so many people like my story... :o! Anyway...

Her hand shook as she picked up the photo. There was others. There was a picture of her sitting with Jess. There was a photo of Jess crying with a gun to her head. Lisa moved her thumb. Jess was holding a gun - Jess tried to shoot them.
"Ohh my gooood.." Lisa pasted out. She woke up in Jess' car. Tom was sitting next to her - with a horrified look on his face. "Whats wrong hun?" Lisa held his hand - his eyes were watering. "Tom-" Thats when Lisa heard the CD.
""Hiya Jess how has your day been?""OK - yours?"" Jack had bugged her phone line.

Cass.
12-11-2005, 07:23 PM
nooo write more :'(

Emicat
12-11-2005, 07:59 PM
Tom had played the CD on the CD player. The box was in the backseat. Tom's eyes were watering and sparkling in the moonlight. Lisa had never seen her boyfriend cry. Well, apart from the Monster wegie in Year 8.
"Lisa whats going on" Tom sighed with a tear sliding down his cheek.
"I don't know Tom - I have no idea" Lisa hugged Tom. He buried his face in her ripped shirt. "I think we should go somewhere safe - but I think Jess will be okay yet we need to take her with us." Lisa whispered. Tom nodded his head. He got out the car and picked her up. He lay her in the backseat. "I can't drive." Tom gulped. "I should think not - you are 16!" Lisa smiled. Tom smiled back and started the car. They drove to Lisa's house. Her living room window was smashed and Zero was whimpering behind a chair. Lisa pushed the front door open and her dog jumped out at her. She picked him up and stroked his head. Tom joinned in the hug. They were safe at last. Lisa put her dog down and he went and played with a toy. Tom held Lisa's waist and kissed her neck. "Tom you nearly died! How can you be in the mood for making out?!?" Lisa exclaimed. "Because I love you. Thats why" Tom mubled inbetween kisses. Lisa giggled and went into her kitchen and Tom cotinued kissing her neck from behind. She grabbed a bottle of Lamberine and downed half. Lisa got drunk very easily. Tom drunk the rest yet he got drunk easily too. The next thing she knew she woke up. In bed with a naked Tom.

Cass.
12-11-2005, 08:47 PM
Tom had played the CD on the CD player. The box was in the backseat. Tom's eyes were watering and sparkling in the moonlight. Lisa had never seen her boyfriend cry. Well, apart from the Monster wegie in Year 8.
"Lisa whats going on" Tom sighed with a tear sliding down his cheek.
"I don't know Tom - I have no idea" Lisa hugged Tom. He buried his face in her ripped shirt. "I think we should go somewhere safe - but I think Jess will be okay yet we need to take her with us." Lisa whispered. Tom nodded his head. He got out the car and picked her up. He lay her in the backseat. "I can't drive." Tom gulped. "I should think not - you are 16!" Lisa smiled. Tom smiled back and started the car. They drove to Lisa's house. Her living room window was smashed and Zero was whimpering behind a chair. Lisa pushed the front door open and her dog jumped out at her. She picked him up and stroked his head. Tom joinned in the hug. They were safe at last. Lisa put her dog down and he went and played with a toy. Tom held Lisa's waist and kissed her neck. "Tom you nearly died! How can you be in the mood for making out?!?" Lisa exclaimed. "Because I love you. Thats why" Tom mubled inbetween kisses. Lisa giggled and went into her kitchen and Tom cotinued kissing her neck from behind. She grabbed a bottle of Lamberine and downed half. Lisa got drunk very easily. Tom drunk the rest yet he got drunk easily too. The next thing she knew she woke up. In bed with a naked Tom.

:o shocking

Addie
12-11-2005, 09:01 PM
Tom had played the CD on the CD player. The box was in the backseat. Tom's eyes were watering and sparkling in the moonlight. Lisa had never seen her boyfriend cry. Well, apart from the Monster wegie in Year 8.
"Lisa whats going on" Tom sighed with a tear sliding down his cheek.
"I don't know Tom - I have no idea" Lisa hugged Tom. He buried his face in her ripped shirt. "I think we should go somewhere safe - but I think Jess will be okay yet we need to take her with us." Lisa whispered. Tom nodded his head. He got out the car and picked her up. He lay her in the backseat. "I can't drive." Tom gulped. "I should think not - you are 16!" Lisa smiled. Tom smiled back and started the car. They drove to Lisa's house. Her living room window was smashed and Zero was whimpering behind a chair. Lisa pushed the front door open and her dog jumped out at her. She picked him up and stroked his head. Tom joinned in the hug. They were safe at last. Lisa put her dog down and he went and played with a toy. Tom held Lisa's waist and kissed her neck. "Tom you nearly died! How can you be in the mood for making out?!?" Lisa exclaimed. "Because I love you. Thats why" Tom mubled inbetween kisses. Lisa giggled and went into her kitchen and Tom cotinued kissing her neck from behind. She grabbed a bottle of Lamberine and downed half. Lisa got drunk very easily. Tom drunk the rest yet he got drunk easily too. The

next thing she knew she woke up. In bed with a naked Tom.

TOTALLY SHOCKIN

Emicat
12-11-2005, 09:10 PM
She was shocked. How had she let this happen? And why had he taken advantage? She looked over, Tom was snoring loudly. She put her dressing down on and walked into the kitchen. She passed a Jess with a can of larger in her hand, asleep on the sofa.
"Looks like she had fun..." Lisa thought. Lisa put some bread into the toaster and poured out a glass of Milk. Tom shuffled into the kitchen.
"Lisa, I'm so sorry. I don't know why I slept with you-" Tom blushed. He was really sorry. Lisa gave him a hug "Its ok - at least we used a..." Lisa pulled back. "Did we use a condom?" Lisa gulped. "Er..." Tom stuttered. She ran upto her bathroom and pulled out a "Clearblue pregancy test" box. She peed on the end. And looked at the result. "TOM!" Lisa screamed.

mynameishelen!
12-11-2005, 09:28 PM
You must be ace at english, they rawk :)
but tests dont show ur pregnant till at least 10 weeks in :p

Emicat
13-11-2005, 12:29 PM
You must be ace at english, they rawk :)
but tests dont show ur pregnant till at least 10 weeks in :p

Did I say she was pregnant?

mynameishelen!
13-11-2005, 03:27 PM
Did I say she was pregnant?

No, didnt say you did. But why would she use one straight after, since if she is pregnant it's not going to show anything ?

Embean
13-11-2005, 04:31 PM
*GASPS* MOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Does that sound rude :o

Addie
13-11-2005, 04:35 PM
She was shocked. How had she let this happen? And why had he taken advantage? She looked over, Tom was snoring loudly. She put her dressing down on and walked into the kitchen. She passed a Jess with a can of larger in her hand, asleep on the sofa.
"Looks like she had fun..." Lisa thought. Lisa put some bread into the toaster and poured out a glass of Milk. Tom shuffled into the kitchen.
"Lisa, I'm so sorry. I don't know why I slept with you-" Tom blushed. He was really sorry. Lisa gave him a hug "Its ok - at least we used a..." Lisa pulled back. "Did we use a condom?" Lisa gulped. "Er..." Tom stuttered. She ran upto her bathroom and pulled out a "Clearblue pregancy test" box. She peed on the end. And looked at the result. "TOM!" Lisa screamed.


OH MY GAWD! I HOPE SHES PREGNANT LOL

Embean
13-11-2005, 04:43 PM
OH MY GAWD! I HOPE SHES PREGNANT LOL

YOU CRUEL PERSON :)

Emicat
13-11-2005, 04:44 PM
No, didnt say you did. But why would she use one straight after, since if she is pregnant it's not going to show anything ?

Its a story. It doesn't have to make sence. And she got worked up - I prob wouldn't be thinking straight. STOP ASKING QUESTIONS! :(

Addie
13-11-2005, 04:48 PM
YOU CRUEL PERSON :)

:o


EMI DO MOREEEEEEEEEE

Embean
13-11-2005, 05:08 PM
OF WHATTTTTTTT

mynameishelen!
13-11-2005, 06:03 PM
Its a story. It doesn't have to make sence. And she got worked up - I prob wouldn't be thinking straight. STOP ASKING QUESTIONS! :(

Sorreh :( didn't mean to critisize
story rawks ;)

Emicat
13-11-2005, 07:07 PM
ITSS OOOOOOOKKKKKKKKKAYYYYYY LYK OMGZ MY COMP RSTARTED N I LOST DA NEXT CHAPTA LOLDORDZ :p o.O :'(

I DO IT 2mOZ LOLZORD

Extra77
15-11-2005, 07:53 AM
Hahahaha that ws funny ... actually it isnt

Emicat
15-11-2005, 08:00 PM
Thats very nice. I can't remeber what was going to happen :/ GOD DAMN ALCOHOL DESTROYING MY BRAIN CELLS :@

kasi
16-11-2005, 10:13 PM
more chapters pls.

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