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    Default A heart lost and gone. (STORY)

    PG13 - contains mild Whisle-whisle content, violence and swearing (No, it doesn't get that bad - you baby)

    Lisa was a simple 16 year old. She didn't have lots of friends, only two. Jess and Toni. Ever since first year at secondary, Lisa had fancied Jack. He was so cute, and atheletic.
    Lisa walked into "Stockton Secondary School" and sat on the benches near the gates.
    "Wow. This school is so small..." she said to Jess.
    "You seen Toni? She's got a lip-ring!" Jess happily replied
    "Damnit. She copied me again."
    Sonn enough, Toni bounced through the school gates with her black hair bouncing with her. Lisa glared at her hair and lip-ring. "She wants to be me so much. I'm begining to hate her" She thought.
    "HIYA!! Wanta ciggie? Oh my god you know what happened? You know Ben? Well he asked me out and I was like EWW and then..."
    "God she just goes on and on" Lisa whispered to Jess.
    "I know, I don't know how she can breathe!" Jess giggled.

    Everyone pilled into science after registraision. Lisa fiddled with her lip-ring and saw that Toni looked at her, and laughed every now and then.
    "Hey, can I sit here?" Jack ran in just before the bell. Lisa was too busy spitting at Toni to realise who it was sitting next to her "Oh yeah, sure whatever..."

    "LISA!! PAY ATTENTION!" Mr. Sittion screamed. Lisa acctually realised she'd been staring at Jack for 10 minuites and he had been staring back.
    "Lisa? Are you feeling ok..."
    "Yeah! Hehe yeah I feel fine! Hehehehe... sh*t..."
    Lisa dropped a purple pencil on the floor, and she bent down to get it and...

    TO BE CONTINUED!!!1!

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    Yey! More more more.... 10/10m but MORE MORE MORE

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    Lisa dropped a purple pencil on the floor, and she bent down to get it and SMACK.
    "You have a lovely A*S!" Jack shouted loudly. Lisa picked up her pencil and sat down quietly. Does he like me? Lisa thought. Jack always had known she'd fancied him - but he always did act like a year 7...
    "JACK! STOP THAT FOOLISH ACT AND GET ON WITH YOUR WORK!"
    "Ok Mr Sitty-on-it" Jack smirked.
    Lisa gave a sort of nervous laugh that sounded like train.
    "Ha-ha-ha-ha...!"

    Break arrived. Everyone rushed to the door, and Lisa was burning with anger as Toni flirted with Jack. "She KNOWS I like him! Why would she do that?!" She screamed at Jess.
    "Take it EEEZEE!" Jess sighed "You know she wants to be you. In year 9 she dyed her hair black like you, and now the lip-ring? Pl-ease!"
    Lisa laughed and pulled a lose piece of hair behind her ear. Jack came after her "Mcdonald! Mcdonald! KFC and a pizza hut!" he screeched at a small ginger boy in the yard. Poor kid, his inials were KFC. Soon enough, Jack was squarking and pecking at this lil lad.
    "Hey! Why are you doing that?" Lisa shouted. Jack bared his braces at Lisa. "Oh look who it is. The goth! Blo*dy goody two shoes! Goth the time?!"
    "Chav a watch??" Lisa replied. She had heard them all before. "Most chavs can't even spell goth" She smiled at Jess. "Yer we can. Its G-O-G-H!"
    Lisa sighed "Chavs..." and walked up to art cause the bell had rung.

    TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111111111111111111111111111111111. ..................1..

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    And that is 11/10 Moree

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    Art always s*cks in Lisa's school. They get to draw flowers and DOORS AND WINDOWS!
    "Goddamn this cr*p art stu-pido!" Lisa whinned.
    "Aye. Soooooooo boring and the Teacher looks as bad as this place!" Jess complained.
    "Am I? Oh what a shame. Maybe you would like to stay behind to apheresiate going to school and wasting time like I have to everyday!" Mrs Niall screamed.
    "Erm, no not really, no!" Jess screamed back.
    The teacher sighed, and turned to hand out books.
    Prod. Prod. Prod. "Hey, quit it!" Lisa moaned. Toni was poking her in the back with a pencil.
    "Make me b*tch!" Toni grinned. "Some friend" Lisa sighed. Stools screached across the floor and muttering began. Suddenly the Art Studio door slammed against the wall and there stood Lisa's boyfriend, Tom.
    "Sorry I'm late miss but I couldn't be a*sed to go to Science so I skipped it." Lisa had forgotten all about him. "I thought you were going to meet me at the corner shop!" Tom cried to Lisa as he sat next to her. "I'm sorry hun, I forgot all about you." Lisa apollogized to Tom and kissed him politely on the lips. Yet that kiss ended up as a full-on passonate snog right in the middle of Art.
    "A-hem. Do you two mind?" was just possible to hear through the wolf whistles and Get a room!'s. Lisa blushed as she kissed him. She pushed her hands through his long black hair. "I love this dude so much" Lisa thought.
    Quite weirdly - she saw Jess glaring at her. Did she fancy Tom? "I love you Lise - but why is Jess staring?" Tom whispered. "I don't know. I'll talk to her next lesson".

    The bell rang loudy and a mosh pit formed outside the classroom. Lisa linked Jess and Tom to walk up to PE.
    "God art couldn't be eciting even if it was taught by Gerard Way in a G-string!" Lisa giggled. Tom put his arm around her and kissed her head. Tom was quite tall for his age. He towered over Lisa and could get alcohol from ASDA. Jess pulled them apart.
    "Public display of affection is a no-no!" Jess muttered at them.

    In the changing rooms, Lisa pulled Jess to one side.
    "Do you fancy Tom? Cause I'm sick of you staring at..."
    "NO" Jess shouted. "I don't like lads! I'm.. erm..."
    Jess cupped Lisa's face in her hands. "Gay" And then she paissonetly kissed Lisa. She tryed to pull away from Jess, but she was so strong. Then Lisa blacked out after a sharp pain in her arm.

    "What the-" Lisa awoke in the Cleaner's room. Her clothes were no where to be seen. She quickly grabbed a towel and glanced at her arm. There was a needle hole. "HELP Someone help me I'm locked in here please help me please!!! Let me out please! Jess attacked me please please!"

    Lisa openned her eyes. She was lying on the changing room floor. Everyone was starring at her. Even Tom had put his head around the changing room door.

    TO BE CONTINUED!!!!1

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    Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee 1000/10 That was omg. and omg MORE!

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    Wow, Thats a pretty good story.
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    Thats what you think, but its NOT over yet!
    "Lisa I'm-"
    "ITS OK!! Hehehehe..." Lisa started rocking back and forward. "Its ok. She won't touch you. Its ok. She won't touch you..." She kept telling herself.

    Lisa was excused from PE as she fell and hit her head.
    "HEREEES TOMMY!" Tom shouted as he sat next to Lisa at lunch.
    "Oh, hi Tom..." Lisa quivered. "I saw you having a nervous break down, what’s up?" Lisa was asked. She tried to speak yet no words came out. Tom hugged her "Its ok, whatever happens I'll look after you. Unless something happens to me. Then its your turn!" Tom giggled. Lisa was just happy to be with him. She pulled away and started munching on a sandwich. They were sitting on the benches near the gates. "You wanna go and get something to eat Lise?" she nodded and put her lunch back in her bag. Tom pulled her up and they walked out the gates hand in hand.

    "Where shall we go? McDonalds or Bugerking?" Tom asked.
    "McDonalds please. I wanna happy meal!" Lisa grinned. They pushed the doors and walked in the deserted resturant. She sat at a table while he got their food. Lisa played with a straw and Tom sat next to her. "You know Lisa, I really love you..." "I muve you moo" Lisa mumbled through a mouth full of Fries and Cheese Buger. She swallowed and kissed Tom on the nose. He and Lisa hugged. "I think we should get going and we'll eat our stuff on the way back, kay?" Lisa said. "Yer, ok hun".

    They walked back, through the woods. Lisa's head swelled with memories. After all, this was where they first met. She glanced around, she saw "TOM 4 LISE" on a tree, and the place where they first kissed. The campfire spot, right under the stars. At night it was surreal and beautiful.
    "Remember this Tom?" Lisa beamed. He nodded and smiled - he was halfway through his Chicken Nuggets. He put his arm around Lisa kissed her on the lips. They started kissing.

    Bang.

    Tom and lisa jumped startled and confused. A bullet hit the tree, right in the "4".
    "LETS GO!" Tom screamed. They ran through the hedges and through the flowers. They got through the school gates. Puffing and moaning they collasped into each others arms.
    "Thank god - honey I love you soo much." Lisa puffed. "I love you with all my heat, oh heart! Handwriting!" Tom smiled, inhailing fast. Tom loved Little Britain so much - he'd say the catchphrases at the most awquard moments. "Hey Toni! You seen Jess?" Tom shouted. "Nah, I saw her with Jack before, but that was at the start of lun-"
    The bell rung. Time for forum room.

    TO BE CONTINUED...

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    See you can join me and xhannx in the writing department and CursedHeart

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    What the hell is that? :/ lol :p

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