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[Addie]

She was the most perfect girl ever. Everyone wanted to be Danneh Hutchison. She was 13 and most people said she was gorgeous. But I'm April Thomas and I'm 12. I hate make-up and dresses and don't even get me started on dolls. Me and my friends Dylan, Addie and Abbey were all boyish. We played football, climbed trees, got dirty, and done really what boys do. Danneh said ''Thats gross!'' But we know its cool. One day when me, Addie, Abbey and Dylan were in a tree we saw Danneh and Jake sit under the tree. Jake is 14. Some say he's gorgeous. I say he's blugh. So they started kissing and Abbey got a bucket of worms we got and poured it down on them. We laughed so loud that Danneh saw us. ''I'M GONNA GET YOU!'' She shouted and walked off. ''Not if we get you first!'' Addie shouted. We got down from the tree and we were covered in dirt. It was only 8pm but we went into our houses. I went up to my room and on my bed was a parcel. I opened it and it was the spy kit i ordered. I put it under my bed and looked outside. No one was outside. So I decided to call Abbey. ''Hey'' I said. ''Hey'' she replied. We talked for an hour and then I went downstairs for something to eat. I got some tacos and juice and went into my room. I ate the tacos and crawled into bed. The next morning I woke up at 8am. I got dressed and went downstairs. My mum and dad had left a note saying '' Away to Asda's breakfast on the table'' My breakfast was a ham sandwich. I called my mum and said ''Keys at Aunty Linda's I'm going out'' My mum replied with ''Ok then we'll be home in an hour. I got my spy kit and went outside for Abbey, Dylan and Addie.


Please Comment :)

[Aliness]

Ooooooh,
Its good Id change the bit about a bucket of worms :l
I mean, Ive never seen a bucket of worms,
and, I mean, Water would be better.
WEll done,
Keep up the good work
-Aliness

[Addie]

Thanks :) I didn't know what to put lol.

[Addie]

They were sitting by the tree but Abbey wasn't there. So i went over to them and said ''Wheres Abbey?'' ''She's not feeling well.'' Dylan said shrugging. It starting pouring of rain and Dylan and Addie said ''We're going!'' So I went inside and put my spy kit upstairs. I got my wireless laptop, put my jacket on and headed next door to Abbey. I knocked on the door and Abbey answered. ''I'm not well'' she said. ''I know. Dylan told me. I brought my laptop for that website.'' I said. We went into her room and opened our laptops. We were making a website for skating and guitar songs and all that stuff. We made our own skater layout and it was so cool. It even got classified as an official skater website. Then i went home but my mum or dad wasn't in. So i had to run to my Aunty Linda's. My mum and dad were there and they gave me the key. I went home and went on my laptop.

Heehee. I'd write more. But I donno watta write.

[Emicat]

HERE comes MSN :/

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[Addie]

HERE comes MSN :/

What?

[Emicat]

Pineapple.



MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!


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[Reeceykins]

Kinda just goes on a bit at the end..

[Addie]

I dont get it.

[Emicat]

I like pieH!


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[dittobrain]

Pineapple.



MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!
Lol
i like pineapples

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[Addie]

Don't Post Pointless Thread Thats Nothing To Do With This Story!

Back ON Topic.

I logged onto my website started putting tricks and skills onto it and then my doorbell went. I ran downstairs to answer it. It was Dylan. He was in a blanket. He was shaking so I took him upstairs to my room. He said ''My mum has had an affair and shes,'' He didn't finish it. ''What is it?'' I asked. ''Pregnant..'' He said shaking. He hugged me and I hugged him back. ''So what have you been up to now?'' He asked. ''Just making my skater website.'' I said. ''Cool, Lets see it'' Dylan said. So I put it onto it and Dylan said ''Wow! Thats amazing!'' ''Thanks I just made it.'' I replied. Dylan asked if I wanted to go to the skate park and we can take some pictures and videos so I agreed. We got some amazing stuff. At the skate park we saw Abbey. ''Hey Abbs!'' I shouted. She came over and said ''Hi'' I taped Abbey and got some snaps. We then went home at about 7pm. I got into my house and my mum and dad were in. They were watching a film. I said to them ''Just me'' and my mum said ''Ok lock the door.'' So I went and locked it. I then went upstairs and downloaded the photos and videos. I put them on my site and I had finished it for now. I posted it on a skate website and went to bed. The next morning I checked it and I had over 5,000 comments and over 10,000 views. So then me, Dylan, Abbey and Addie started making our on skater t-shirts for only £7. And even A DAAA (Thats Dylan,April,Abbey,Addie) Goody things for free(Only £1 deposit). We became great at it. Then we saw an order. It was from DANNEH! So we sent her them and a nice letter. She replied saying ''Thanks for the things, Im ment to be a girly girl but I want to skateboard'' and put towards £8. We sent her one back saying who we were and she said she was SORRY!

Please comment >:)

[Emicat]

Then Emicat got bored and fell asleep ¬_¬; lmao, I donno what happens next in MY story.

Someone (other than Spork) go read my story! "A heart lost and gone"


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I shall do as I please!! ANARCHY!! MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!! Lmao :p

Anyway, tis' an kk story.

[Addie]

The next day at school I went over to Danneh and showed her the letter and her website adress. She said ''Well, I really want to be friends.'' ''Wwwhat?'' I asked. ''I want to be friends!'' She said. I then said ''Well, Why?'' ''Because, I like to skate. And you'se are great at it too. Please? My mum and dad say I have to be a girly girl. So with my £50 I bought a Skateboard for £21.'' Danneh said queitly. A few days later was halloween. Me and Abbey weren't aloud to go trick-or-treating so we stayed at home.


Im so bored! Ill do some more later.

[CursedHeart]

its okay, im seeing a few too many stories about little girls and boys on this forum lol

[Addie]

its okay, im seeing a few too many stories about little girls and boys on this forum lol

Lol. Im getting bored with this story. Awk i'll make anuther one :D