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[Addie]

She was the most perfect girl ever. Everyone wanted to be Danneh Hutchison. She was 13 and most people said she was gorgeous. But I'm April Thomas and I'm 12. I hate make-up and dresses and don't even get me started on dolls. Me and my friends Dylan, Addie and Abbey were all boyish. We played football, climbed trees, got dirty, and done really what boys do. Danneh said ''Thats gross!'' But we know its cool. One day when me, Addie, Abbey and Dylan were in a tree we saw Danneh and Jake sit under the tree. Jake is 14. Some say he's gorgeous. I say he's blugh. So they started kissing and Abbey got a bucket of worms we got and poured it down on them. We laughed so loud that Danneh saw us. ''I'M GONNA GET YOU!'' She shouted and walked off. ''Not if we get you first!'' Addie shouted. We got down from the tree and we were covered in dirt. It was only 8pm but we went into our houses. I went up to my room and on my bed was a parcel. I opened it and it was the spy kit i ordered. I put it under my bed and looked outside. No one was outside. So I decided to call Abbey. ''Hey'' I said. ''Hey'' she replied. We talked for an hour and then I went downstairs for something to eat. I got some tacos and juice and went into my room. I ate the tacos and crawled into bed. The next morning I woke up at 8am. I got dressed and went downstairs. My mum and dad had left a note saying '' Away to Asda's breakfast on the table'' My breakfast was a ham sandwich. I called my mum and said ''Keys at Aunty Linda's I'm going out'' My mum replied with ''Ok then we'll be home in an hour. I got my spy kit and went outside for Abbey, Dylan and Addie.


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[Aliness]

Ooooooh,
Its good Id change the bit about a bucket of worms
I mean, Ive never seen a bucket of worms,
and, I mean, Water would be better.
WEll done,
Keep up the good work
-Aliness

[Addie]

Thanks I didn't know what to put lol.

[Addie]

They were sitting by the tree but Abbey wasn't there. So i went over to them and said ''Wheres Abbey?'' ''She's not feeling well.'' Dylan said shrugging. It starting pouring of rain and Dylan and Addie said ''We're going!'' So I went inside and put my spy kit upstairs. I got my wireless laptop, put my jacket on and headed next door to Abbey. I knocked on the door and Abbey answered. ''I'm not well'' she said. ''I know. Dylan told me. I brought my laptop for that website.'' I said. We went into her room and opened our laptops. We were making a website for skating and guitar songs and all that stuff. We made our own skater layout and it was so cool. It even got classified as an official skater website. Then i went home but my mum or dad wasn't in. So i had to run to my Aunty Linda's. My mum and dad were there and they gave me the key. I went home and went on my laptop.

Heehee. I'd write more. But I donno watta write.

[Emicat]

HERE comes MSN :/

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[Addie]

HERE comes MSN :/

What?

[Emicat]

Pineapple.



MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH!

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[Reeceykins]

Kinda just goes on a bit at the end..

[Addie]

I dont get it.

[Emicat]

I like pieH!

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