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Addie
11-11-2005, 05:03 PM
Chapter 1-

It happend since I was six. Every day my dad would come home and he would hit me. I'm now twelve and I'm terrified of him since I knew what he was doing. I always thought of running away on my way to school, but he might catch me. He only hit me and battered me because my mum divorced him and moved to Canada. I wish I went with her. So every day 5:00pm sharp he'd come in and do something nasty to me. I didn't talk back or call a childline but I really wanted to. ''CALLIE! GET OVER HERE NOW!'' He shouted to me. ''You called?'' I asked. ''GO TO BED! YOU WERE A MINUTE LATE!'' He yelled. ''Late for what?'' I asked. ''LATE FOR WHAT?YOU KNOW FINE WELL! NOW MOVE!'' He yelled. So I ran up to my room and cried myself to sleep. My dad came up and did something. I didn't know what but he did something to me. As he left I didn't have a mark or bruise but what did he do? The next morning I woke up and It was only 7:21am. I got dressed and my dad was away at work. I left the house and walked to school. My best friend Amber was there. ''Hi Callie.'' She said. ''Hi.'' I mummered. ''Whats up?'' She asked. ''What do you think?'' I said staring at the ground. Amber was the only one who knew what was going on. I knew she wouldn't tell a sole. ''Cal! You need to tell the police or a social worker, or something!'' Amber said. '' I can't. I won't. I want to. But He has a record of who I call.'' I said. ''Use a pay phone'' She replied. ''No! I can't.'' I said. The bell rang. We went to our form and at 9:06am We went into our class. ''Ok class. We have our creative writing visitor today.'' Miss.Leecall said. A girl was standing beside her. ''This is Miss.Linda Arthur. She writes novels.'' Miss.Leecall said. ''Hi class. I would like you all to pair up and write a story. But on your own. Just discuss it.'' Miss.Arthur said. Me and Amber paired up. ''What you writing about?'' I mummered. ''Well, About the time in the woods. Remember when we saw things move. They were ghosts. What about you?'' Amber said. ''I don't know.'' I said. ''How about whats going on in your life?'' Amber suggested. ''No way!'' I said. ''Yea! Do that'' Amber said. ''What if my dad sees it?'' I asked. ''He won't. Please do it.'' Amber whined. ''Ok! I'll call it...... '' Callie ''.'' I said. ''Ok I'm calling mine.... '' Amber. The Founder Of PineWood Woods.'' Amber said.

Chapter 2 today

RainFall.
11-11-2005, 05:07 PM
NICE 10/10 MOOOREEE

Addie
11-11-2005, 05:30 PM
Chapter 2-

So we started writing away. I done about three chapters when the bell rang. ''OK CLASS WE WILL CONTINUE AFTER BRAKE!'' Miss.Leecall shouted. ''So we're doing this all day?'' Ross asked. ''Yes. But all next week you will have Monday- Science Test. Tuesday- Maths Test. Wednesday-Reading Test. Thursday and Friday- Other Science tests.'' Miss.Leecall said with a big grin on her face. ''AWK!'' Ross shouted. ''ROSS JONSON!'' Miss.Leecall yelled. ''Sorry!'' Ross said not meaning it. ''CLASS DISMISSED.'' Miss.Leecall yelled. Me and Amber put our books in our tray and left last. We were talking outside the door when we heard it. We heard Miss.Leecall and Miss.Arthur talking. Miss.Leecall said ''I can't believe it. At Pinewood Woods the witches killed my husband!'' Me and Amber looked at each other. ''Wow!'' Amber whispered. They went on. ''What? Didn't that Amber Hutchison go in that woods and saw some spooky things?'' Miss.Arthur asked. ''Yes! And no one must ever go in there again!'' Miss.Leechman said. Me and Amber ran out. ''WE WILL GO IN THERE!'' Amber said. ''No way!'' I said. Amber was always up for adventures. ''Well I am.'' Amber said. ''I'll tag along. Tonight?'' I said. ''Yea. I'll bring a video camera.'' Amber said. I thought. I thought hard. ''Amber? Can I borrow your mobile?'' I asked. ''Yea sure.'' She said handing it to me. I dialled 999. ''Hello?'' I said. ''Hello what is the problem?'' The man on the other end asked. ''Since I was six my dad has been hiting and batternig me..'' I said.

Chapter 3-......Today....

PLEASE COMMENT

Addie
11-11-2005, 10:40 PM
Chapter 3-

''I'm sorry? What was that?'' The police officer asked. ''I said my dad has been harming me since I was six. I am now twlelve and covered in marks and bruises.'' I repeated. Amber gave me a narrowish look. ''Whats your adress?'' The man asked. ''16 Spooner Street.'' I said. ''We'll look into it. I will send a social worker down to check everythings ok.'' The man said. ''He yells and harms me for no reason!'' I repeated angry now. ''I'm sorry we will have a social worker put cameras in your house. Thats all we can do so far.'' The man said hanging up. I switched the phone off and gave it to Amber. ''Oh my god! You did it!'' Amber said smiling. ''Yup! And now we're going into the woods. Hey! wait. Its 12pm. Dinnertime. c'mon'' I said. Amber and I walked towards the woods. Amber had been to her house and we had the video camera. We headed in the woods. We saw it. The thing that Amber saw last year. It. It was it. It was the witch. The killer. The witch. It was said to be a hoax. Uh-Uh. Amber taped it. We shivered and ran. It was comming. We ran, ran ran! We got out. The thing wasn't there. We ran to school. It was now 1pm. We got into our class on time. We sat down and our teacher and Miss.Arthur walked in. They told us to get on with our book. I did more. But! Amber was shaking. ''What is it?'' I whispered. ''We shouldn't of went in there!'' Amber whispered. ''I know, Lets forget about it.'' I said. When it was hometime Amber was scared. Shaking. We walked home and I went in my house. It wasn't normal. My so called dad was there. ''CALLIE, CALLIE, CALLIE'' He said smiling. ''What?'' I asked. ''If you don't move out NOW! I will fling you out.'' He said. ''Are you serious?'' I asked. ''Yes! NOW PACK! YOU HAVE TWO HOURS.'' He said. I ran upstairs. Surley he was joking. I packed my stuff and left. I went to the police. I told them my dad had chucked me out. The police phoned a social worker and until further notice I went into a orphanage (Foster Home). It was ok. I had a nice room. I shared with a girl named Abbey. She walked in. ''Hi I'm Callie.'' I said. ''Hello, I'm Abbey.What are you herre for?'' She asked. ''My dad is nasty. What about you?'' I asked. ''Well, My mom and dad left me with my auntie and she couldn't cope so here I am.'' She said. ''Oh. Well How old are you? Im twelve.'' I said. ''I'm eleven.'' She replied. ''So are you from here?'' I asked. ''Nope! America. And I wish I was there.'' She said sighing. ''Oh.'' I said. The girl walked out and I was wanting to call Amber. I went to the social worker and asked if I could phone her. I dialed her number and told her everything.


''Can;twritemore'' Chapter4- Today/Tommorow.

Marco
11-11-2005, 10:47 PM
That WAS BRILL!!!! 10/10 +REPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

Harry_
12-11-2005, 10:57 AM
:o That was magnificent!
What will Amber say?
Will SHE and her family take her in?
So tense :d +Rep Spork :)

Addie
12-11-2005, 11:28 AM
Chapter 4-

''Oh my god!'' Amber said. ''I know.'' I replied. ''What do you think will happen then?'' Amber asked. ''I don't know. But I'm not going back to my old house. I just hope a miracle will happen.'' I said. ''Yea. Well I have to go. My mum needs the phone. Talk later, Bye.'' Amber said. ''Bye'' I said hanging up. I went back into my room and Abbey was there. I sat on my bed and stared at the ground. Abbey was reading a book. ''How long have you been here?'' I blurted out. ''Nearly three years.'' Abbey said. ''Oh. Do you like it here?'' I asked. ''Of corse I don't! No one does!'' Abbey said. ''Have you heard of Pinewood Woods?'' I asked. ''Yea! I was there. With a girl called Rebecca. I haven't seen her since.'' Abbey replied. ''Ive been in there with my best friend Amber.'' I said. ''Really? Amber Hutchison?'' Abbey asked. ''Yea! You know her?'' I asked. ''Yea! I lost contact.'' Abbey said. ''Callie?'' My social worker called. ''Comming'' I yelled. ''Cya,'' Abbey said. I walked to my social worker. ''Callie, This is Donna and James Anderson.'' My social worker Louise said. ''Hi'' I said smiling. ''Hello.'' The Andersons replied. ''Callie, These are your new foster parents. They have a four year old daughter Chloe. ''Ok...'' I said. I was happy. I took my suitcase from the room I was ment to be in, Abbey wasn't there. I left in the car. ''So do you like little sisters?'' Donna asked. ''Ive never had one.'' I said. ''Well, You'll like Chloe. Shes adorable and dosen't annoy anyone.'' James said. Five minutes later we arrived at a big house. ''Cool!'' I said. ''Well. Your room has a bathroom in it and its huge.'' Donna said smiling. We got out the car and went into the house. ''Chloe is at nursery and I'm going to go and pick her up'' James said. Donna showed me around the house and I loved my room. Chloe had a little table and chairs with plastic scones. It was adorable.

I love this story!

Chapter5- Today...

Thx for comments

Wolfie
12-11-2005, 11:37 AM
OMG! Best Story Ever after you finished ill pay u 1 0.5 rare on habbo +rep

Addie
12-11-2005, 11:38 AM
OMG! Best Story Ever after you finished ill pay u 1 0.5 rare on habbo +rep

tHAnks lol ;]

Wolfie
12-11-2005, 11:47 AM
in fact search tutu1(not my room but i like it) ill give u 0.5 rare there

Addie
12-11-2005, 12:01 PM
in fact search tutu1(not my room but i like it) ill give u 0.5 rare there

Ok Im there in troubled help my name is Spork-

mynameishelen!
12-11-2005, 12:11 PM
7/10
great idea for a story ;)
+rep

Addie
12-11-2005, 12:25 PM
Chapter 5-

James walked in with Chloe. Chloe looked at me and said in the cutest voice ''Hello I'm Chloe whats your name?'' ''Hi Chloe, I'm Callie'' I said. ''Are you my new sister my daddy was telling me about?'' She asked. ''Well, I don't know yet.'' I said. James said ''I'm going to make a snack.'' Chloe came over to me and said ''Do you want to play dollies?'' ''No thanks I'm too old.'' I said. ''Well, want to go in the pool in the garden?''. I thought they were rich now. ''Ok. Go and get your swim suit on and I'll get mine on.'' I said. Chloe ran out and shouted to Donna ''MUMMY I NEED MY SWIMMY SUIT.'' Donna came up and changed her. I got changed and me and Chloe went into the pool. It wasn't deep because Chloe hadn't had swimming lessons yet. It was ok for me and Chloe had a rubber ring. We splashed about and raced. I wanted to live here forever and ever. Chloe splashed me and I tried to catch her. She floats on her ring and I couldn't catch her. About an hour later we came out and got dressed. Chloe said to me ''I want you to be my big sister.'' I thought and I wanted to be her sister. ''Want to play outside?'' I asked her. ''Not the now I'm going to take a nap'' She said yawning. How cute was that? I sat in my room and sat on the window ledge. It was a seat thing so I can sit. Donna and James came up into my room. ''Callie?'' James said. ''Yes?'' I asked. ''Me and Donna were thinking....'' James said. ''Yes?'' I asked. ''We would like to permanatly adopt you. We see you and Chloe. She loves you'' James said. Donna added ''Is that ok?'' ''I would love you too!'' I said hugging them.

Chapter 6- Today/

Wolfie
12-11-2005, 12:29 PM
kwl story once again!

Addie
12-11-2005, 02:27 PM
Chapter 6-

One hour later Chloe woke up. It was three o'clock. Donna made us cheese and tomato pizza (my favorite) it was yummy. It was Chloe's favorite too. After we had out dinner me and Chloe went outside in the garden to play. About an hour later It started puring down of rain. Chloe fell and was all dirty. I carried her indoors. Donna gave her a bath and I phoned Amber. ''Hey Amb.'' I said. ''Hey Cal!'' She replied. ''I've been adopted.'' I said in glee. ''Are they nice?'' Amber asked. ''Yea! I have a sister Chloe whos four.'' I said. ''Is she annoying? Like other four year olds?'' Amber asked. ''Nope! She is so cute and adorable'' I said. We talked four ages. When I hung up I went to see Chloe. She was in her bed watching her television. ''Hey Chloe.'' I said. ''Hi.'' She replied. ''What you watching?'' I asked. ''Hocus Pocus.'' She replied. ''I love that film'' I said. ''Come and watch it with me'' She said. I went beside her and watched it. We fell asleep and the next morning I woke up at eight. I got dressed and read a book.


Sorry I can't continue cauz Im gonna get ready Im going out at 3.

Addie
13-11-2005, 12:01 PM
Chapter 6-

One hour later Chloe woke up. It was three o'clock. Donna made us cheese and tomato pizza (my favorite) it was yummy. It was Chloe's favorite too. After we had out dinner me and Chloe went outside in the garden to play. About an hour later It started puring down of rain. Chloe fell and was all dirty. I carried her indoors. Donna gave her a bath and I phoned Amber. ''Hey Amb.'' I said. ''Hey Cal!'' She replied. ''I've been adopted.'' I said in glee. ''Are they nice?'' Amber asked. ''Yea! I have a sister Chloe whos four.'' I said. ''Is she annoying? Like other four year olds?'' Amber asked. ''Nope! She is so cute and adorable'' I said. We talked four ages. When I hung up I went to see Chloe. She was in her bed watching her television. ''Hey Chloe.'' I said. ''Hi.'' She replied. ''What you watching?'' I asked. ''Hocus Pocus.'' She replied. ''I love that film'' I said. ''Come and watch it with me'' She said. I went beside her and watched it. We fell asleep and the next morning I woke up at eight. I got dressed and read a book.Donna came up into my room and asked ''What do you want for breakfast?'' ''Em..... Sausage and Egg please.'' I said. ''Ok'' she said leaving. Then Chloe came into my room. She came up to me and said ''I want to play outside'' ''Well, after breakfast, and you need to get dressed.'' I said. I went downstairs, followed by Chloe and we had our breakfast. Then I went upstairs and put my swimming suit on. Chloe was in her room with Donna. I heard her say ''Mummy, After swimmy pool can we go too Emily's house?'' Then Donna said ''Well, Yes, But I'll take Callie to her friends house.'' Chloe ran downstairs so I ran after her. We played in the pool, played some games. Then we came out and got dressed. Donna asked me ''Where does your friend stay?'' I forgot about Amber. She probarly had a better life of without me. ''Em, 12 Spooner Sreeet'' I said. Chloe ran downstairs and Donna drove me to Amber's house. ''I'll come back in about two hours.'' She said. ''Ok'' I said. Donna drove away with Chloe. I knocked on Amber's door. Amber answered. ''Hey Amb!'' I said. ''Oh my god CALLIE!'' She shouted. ''Wh..what?'' I asked. ''Never mind. Come in!'' She said. We started talking and she said that Cole asked her out. Cole is really nice but I didn't fancy him. I loved Cody. Cody was so nice I mean really nice and so sweet. Then Donna knocked on the door. ''Well, I'll call you'' Amber said. ''Bye'' I said leaving. I got in the car next to Chloe. ''Donna?'' I asked. ''Yea?'' She said. ''Its my thirteenth birthday next week on December twelve can a few of my friends come round?'' I asked. ''Yea, whatever you want'' She said.

Chapter 7- Callies 13th Birthday.

Btw, When you comment Ill write Chapter 7.....:eusa_danc :eusa_danc

Wolfie
13-11-2005, 12:05 PM
kwl story

Achieve
13-11-2005, 02:13 PM
Great Story =)

Harry_
13-11-2005, 02:24 PM
:o Amazing! You just keep hitting us with brilliant chapters callie :) Chloe sounds so cute
I want tew meet her :d

Addie
13-11-2005, 03:10 PM
Chapter 7-

I woke up and it was my birthday. I went downstairs and Donna and James shouted ''HAPPY BIRTHDAY!'' I jumped out of my skin. Chloe was still asleep so I didn't want to open my presents without her. About an hour later Chloe came downstairs. She jumped onto my knee and said ''Happy bifday'' I asked her ''Do you want to help me open all these presents?'' ''Yes!'' She said. We opened them and I loved everything. Chloe got me a necklace with a locket with a picture of me and her inside it was so adorable. I went upstairs and Chloe helped me take my stuff upstairs. When she went out I got dressed for my party in three hours. I had invited Amber,Cole, Cody, Rebekah, Liam, Maddie and April. Me and Donna got all the food out and put it onto a buffae table. We got a table out for the presents and another for the cards. At two o'clock people started comming. Chloe came down and she was wearing a cute pink dress. I talked to Cody then Amber. Amber was happy that she and Cole went out. I still loved Cody. I didn't know what he felt about me though. I told that to Amber. Then she went over to Cody! I ran to see Chloe. She was sitting on her own. I went over to her and started talking to her. Amber came up to me and grabbed me by the arm. ''GUESS WHAT!?'' She said. ''WHAT!?'' I asked. ''Cody asked me to ask you if you had feelings for him.'' Amber said. I stared at Amber. ''Oh right!'' She said running back over to him. I went to talk to Maddie. Cody then came over to me. It was the dance thing. ''Callie?'' He asked. ''Yea?'' I asked. ''Will you dance with me?'' He asked.


Da dum.... Chapter8- 13th Birthday Dance.

Achieve
13-11-2005, 03:38 PM
Cant wait for next chapter =)

jamesm123
13-11-2005, 03:40 PM
Alot of grammar errors, but nice..

Addie
13-11-2005, 03:58 PM
Alot of grammar errors, but nice..

How is there errors?

Harry_
13-11-2005, 04:27 PM
o.O Do next chapter now now now! May I ask, how do you do a new thread?/make?

Addie
13-11-2005, 04:29 PM
You go to e.g Articles and stories>New thread>title>write> Post reply

Ill do next chapter in an hour/two im having a shower in 10mins :o

Addie
14-11-2005, 06:09 PM
Chapter 8-

Oh my god. I thought. Cody? Me? ''Sure.'' I said. We danced and danced until I was tired. I went over to see Chloe. She was tired. No wonder she was dancing with my friends and Donna. And it was nearly five. I carried Chloe upstairs and put her PJ's on. Chloe went to her bed. I left quietly and I banged into Cody. ''Hi Cody'' I said. ''Hi'' He replied. I started walking downstairs when he ran infront of me. ''What are you do..'' I couldn't finish. He kissed me. How lucky am I? I thought. ''Happy Birthday'' He said. ''Wow!'' I said. ''Look! Callie, I've had a crush on you since last November. Do you like like me?'' He asked. ''Cody, I've had a crush on you since last September.'' I said. I put my arms around him and kissed him. It was my or our dream come true. Cody said he needed the toilet so he went up and I ran to find Amber. ''Hey Amb!'' I said. ''What?'' She asked. ''I kissed CODY! C-O-D-Y CODY!'' I said. ''YOU WHAT?'' She said. ''I did he's had a crush on my since last November!'' I told her. Cody walked in. ''I'll talk to you later I'm gonna go and see Maddie.'' I said. Maddie was cool too. Really nice. I told Maddie everything. At around six everyone went home. Cody came over to me and gave me a kiss and said bye. I went upstairs and put my PJS on.


Chapter9- tODAY ''ment to be'' or tommorow. Next chapter is last of Callie.

Embean
14-11-2005, 06:12 PM
Noooooooo :(

Addie
14-11-2005, 06:13 PM
Noooooooo :(

Lol. Don't worry I'll make a new story tommorow :)

buzzing
14-11-2005, 06:16 PM
Lovely story. Cant wait till u done next ;)

Addie
14-11-2005, 06:17 PM
Lovely story. Cant wait till u done next ;)

I might do Last Chapter in 10 mins, :o

Addie
14-11-2005, 06:45 PM
:'( Unfortuanatly Last Chapter. Dam you Addie :'(

Chapter 9- It comes to an end

I was really happy. I mean Cody! So I told Donna and James and they were really happy for me. I didn't open my presents I wanted to wait until Chloe was up tommorow. I just went to my bed and fell asleep. The next morning I woke up and went downstairs. I got some Lemon and Lime juice and watched television. Chloe soon came downstairs and she helped me open my presents. I couldn't believe what Cody got me. It was a beautiful necklace. I called him and thanked him and called Amber. Then I watched Fairly Odd Parents with Chloe. I think Chloe fell asleep so I got up and changed into my swimsuit. I called Cody, Amber and Amber's boyfriend and told them to bring their swimming stuff. I woke Chloe up and got her changed and we went into the pool. About ten minutes later Ding Dong. I went to answer the door and it was Cody, Amber and Amber's boyfriend. They were in their swimming stuff and we all went back into the pool. It was really fun. Then when they left me and Chloe played in for a little more. Then we went out. It was time for lunch anyway. We got dressed and Donna made us cheese on toast with lemon and lime juice. Yummy! As we ate there was a knock on the door. Who was it? Donna answered it. ''Who are you?'' Donna asked. ''Is Callie here?'' The woman asked. I went over to the door. ''Who are you?'' I asked. ''Callie, I'm your mum.'' She said. ''Well I don't care! You abandoned me with that horrid man for six years. SIX YEARS!'' I yelled. ''Hun, I want you to come to Canada'' She said. ''No'' I said. ''What!?'' My ''mum'' said. ''I'm happy here. I love it here, Go back to Canada!'' I said shutting the door. Donna hugged me and said ''I thought you would of went with her.'' ''Nope.. I love it here.'' I said. Alot of things happend throughout these years.

Ten years later.
I'm pregnant with twins two girls I'm calling one Calisse and Cody's calling one Emily. Cody proposed and we got married. When I gave birth to Calisse and Emily they were healthy, adorable girls. Chloe is now nineteen and is going out with a boy named Dylan. I'm still friends with Amber and Maddie. Amber has a son called Ben and shes pregnant with her second child. As for me, Me and Cody are happy and I've had a tough life, but I'm happy now. And Me and Amber burned the tape of Pinewood Woods. No one knows what we did that day, and no one will ever know.

The End. :'(

Embean
14-11-2005, 06:56 PM
OMG WOOOO.

Addie
14-11-2005, 07:00 PM
OMG WOOOO.

Lol.

Please comment on the story :)

Embean
14-11-2005, 07:12 PM
I did :o

Its woo.

Addie
14-11-2005, 07:34 PM
I did :o

Its woo.

Lol. I need ideas for my next story. :):o

Embean
14-11-2005, 07:36 PM
Do something about teenagers :)
Or romance.. ;o

Addie
14-11-2005, 07:49 PM
Do something about teenagers :)
Or romance.. ;o

o, Good Idea. I ave to give my sis the laptop :'(

Embean
14-11-2005, 07:57 PM
Noopppo. :(

Addie
15-11-2005, 08:01 PM
Noopppo. :(

Lol. Hmmm a story name,...

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