Callie

[Addie]

Chapter 1-

It happend since I was six. Every day my dad would come home and he would hit me. I'm now twelve and I'm terrified of him since I knew what he was doing. I always thought of running away on my way to school, but he might catch me. He only hit me and battered me because my mum divorced him and moved to Canada. I wish I went with her. So every day 5:00pm sharp he'd come in and do something nasty to me. I didn't talk back or call a childline but I really wanted to. ''CALLIE! GET OVER HERE NOW!'' He shouted to me. ''You called?'' I asked. ''GO TO BED! YOU WERE A MINUTE LATE!'' He yelled. ''Late for what?'' I asked. ''LATE FOR WHAT?YOU KNOW FINE WELL! NOW MOVE!'' He yelled. So I ran up to my room and cried myself to sleep. My dad came up and did something. I didn't know what but he did something to me. As he left I didn't have a mark or bruise but what did he do? The next morning I woke up and It was only 7:21am. I got dressed and my dad was away at work. I left the house and walked to school. My best friend Amber was there. ''Hi Callie.'' She said. ''Hi.'' I mummered. ''Whats up?'' She asked. ''What do you think?'' I said staring at the ground. Amber was the only one who knew what was going on. I knew she wouldn't tell a sole. ''Cal! You need to tell the police or a social worker, or something!'' Amber said. '' I can't. I won't. I want to. But He has a record of who I call.'' I said. ''Use a pay phone'' She replied. ''No! I can't.'' I said. The bell rang. We went to our form and at 9:06am We went into our class. ''Ok class. We have our creative writing visitor today.'' Miss.Leecall said. A girl was standing beside her. ''This is Miss.Linda Arthur. She writes novels.'' Miss.Leecall said. ''Hi class. I would like you all to pair up and write a story. But on your own. Just discuss it.'' Miss.Arthur said. Me and Amber paired up. ''What you writing about?'' I mummered. ''Well, About the time in the woods. Remember when we saw things move. They were ghosts. What about you?'' Amber said. ''I don't know.'' I said. ''How about whats going on in your life?'' Amber suggested. ''No way!'' I said. ''Yea! Do that'' Amber said. ''What if my dad sees it?'' I asked. ''He won't. Please do it.'' Amber whined. ''Ok! I'll call it...... '' Callie ''.'' I said. ''Ok I'm calling mine.... '' Amber. The Founder Of PineWood Woods.'' Amber said.

Chapter 2 today

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[Addie]

Chapter 2-

So we started writing away. I done about three chapters when the bell rang. ''OK CLASS WE WILL CONTINUE AFTER BRAKE!'' Miss.Leecall shouted. ''So we're doing this all day?'' Ross asked. ''Yes. But all next week you will have Monday- Science Test. Tuesday- Maths Test. Wednesday-Reading Test. Thursday and Friday- Other Science tests.'' Miss.Leecall said with a big grin on her face. ''AWK!'' Ross shouted. ''ROSS JONSON!'' Miss.Leecall yelled. ''Sorry!'' Ross said not meaning it. ''CLASS DISMISSED.'' Miss.Leecall yelled. Me and Amber put our books in our tray and left last. We were talking outside the door when we heard it. We heard Miss.Leecall and Miss.Arthur talking. Miss.Leecall said ''I can't believe it. At Pinewood Woods the witches killed my husband!'' Me and Amber looked at each other. ''Wow!'' Amber whispered. They went on. ''What? Didn't that Amber Hutchison go in that woods and saw some spooky things?'' Miss.Arthur asked. ''Yes! And no one must ever go in there again!'' Miss.Leechman said. Me and Amber ran out. ''WE WILL GO IN THERE!'' Amber said. ''No way!'' I said. Amber was always up for adventures. ''Well I am.'' Amber said. ''I'll tag along. Tonight?'' I said. ''Yea. I'll bring a video camera.'' Amber said. I thought. I thought hard. ''Amber? Can I borrow your mobile?'' I asked. ''Yea sure.'' She said handing it to me. I dialled 999. ''Hello?'' I said. ''Hello what is the problem?'' The man on the other end asked. ''Since I was six my dad has been hiting and batternig me..'' I said.

Chapter 3-......Today....

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[Addie]

Chapter 3-

''I'm sorry? What was that?'' The police officer asked. ''I said my dad has been harming me since I was six. I am now twlelve and covered in marks and bruises.'' I repeated. Amber gave me a narrowish look. ''Whats your adress?'' The man asked. ''16 Spooner Street.'' I said. ''We'll look into it. I will send a social worker down to check everythings ok.'' The man said. ''He yells and harms me for no reason!'' I repeated angry now. ''I'm sorry we will have a social worker put cameras in your house. Thats all we can do so far.'' The man said hanging up. I switched the phone off and gave it to Amber. ''Oh my god! You did it!'' Amber said smiling. ''Yup! And now we're going into the woods. Hey! wait. Its 12pm. Dinnertime. c'mon'' I said. Amber and I walked towards the woods. Amber had been to her house and we had the video camera. We headed in the woods. We saw it. The thing that Amber saw last year. It. It was it. It was the witch. The killer. The witch. It was said to be a hoax. Uh-Uh. Amber taped it. We shivered and ran. It was comming. We ran, ran ran! We got out. The thing wasn't there. We ran to school. It was now 1pm. We got into our class on time. We sat down and our teacher and Miss.Arthur walked in. They told us to get on with our book. I did more. But! Amber was shaking. ''What is it?'' I whispered. ''We shouldn't of went in there!'' Amber whispered. ''I know, Lets forget about it.'' I said. When it was hometime Amber was scared. Shaking. We walked home and I went in my house. It wasn't normal. My so called dad was there. ''CALLIE, CALLIE, CALLIE'' He said smiling. ''What?'' I asked. ''If you don't move out NOW! I will fling you out.'' He said. ''Are you serious?'' I asked. ''Yes! NOW PACK! YOU HAVE TWO HOURS.'' He said. I ran upstairs. Surley he was joking. I packed my stuff and left. I went to the police. I told them my dad had chucked me out. The police phoned a social worker and until further notice I went into a orphanage (Foster Home). It was ok. I had a nice room. I shared with a girl named Abbey. She walked in. ''Hi I'm Callie.'' I said. ''Hello, I'm Abbey.What are you herre for?'' She asked. ''My dad is nasty. What about you?'' I asked. ''Well, My mom and dad left me with my auntie and she couldn't cope so here I am.'' She said. ''Oh. Well How old are you? Im twelve.'' I said. ''I'm eleven.'' She replied. ''So are you from here?'' I asked. ''Nope! America. And I wish I was there.'' She said sighing. ''Oh.'' I said. The girl walked out and I was wanting to call Amber. I went to the social worker and asked if I could phone her. I dialed her number and told her everything.


''Can;twritemore'' Chapter4- Today/Tommorow.

[Marco]

That WAS BRILL!!!! 10/10 +REPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP

[Harry_]

That was magnificent!
What will Amber say?
Will SHE and her family take her in?
So tense :d +Rep Spork

[Addie]

Chapter 4-

''Oh my god!'' Amber said. ''I know.'' I replied. ''What do you think will happen then?'' Amber asked. ''I don't know. But I'm not going back to my old house. I just hope a miracle will happen.'' I said. ''Yea. Well I have to go. My mum needs the phone. Talk later, Bye.'' Amber said. ''Bye'' I said hanging up. I went back into my room and Abbey was there. I sat on my bed and stared at the ground. Abbey was reading a book. ''How long have you been here?'' I blurted out. ''Nearly three years.'' Abbey said. ''Oh. Do you like it here?'' I asked. ''Of corse I don't! No one does!'' Abbey said. ''Have you heard of Pinewood Woods?'' I asked. ''Yea! I was there. With a girl called Rebecca. I haven't seen her since.'' Abbey replied. ''Ive been in there with my best friend Amber.'' I said. ''Really? Amber Hutchison?'' Abbey asked. ''Yea! You know her?'' I asked. ''Yea! I lost contact.'' Abbey said. ''Callie?'' My social worker called. ''Comming'' I yelled. ''Cya,'' Abbey said. I walked to my social worker. ''Callie, This is Donna and James Anderson.'' My social worker Louise said. ''Hi'' I said smiling. ''Hello.'' The Andersons replied. ''Callie, These are your new foster parents. They have a four year old daughter Chloe. ''Ok...'' I said. I was happy. I took my suitcase from the room I was ment to be in, Abbey wasn't there. I left in the car. ''So do you like little sisters?'' Donna asked. ''Ive never had one.'' I said. ''Well, You'll like Chloe. Shes adorable and dosen't annoy anyone.'' James said. Five minutes later we arrived at a big house. ''Cool!'' I said. ''Well. Your room has a bathroom in it and its huge.'' Donna said smiling. We got out the car and went into the house. ''Chloe is at nursery and I'm going to go and pick her up'' James said. Donna showed me around the house and I loved my room. Chloe had a little table and chairs with plastic scones. It was adorable.

I love this story!

Chapter5- Today...

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