this one is not so good hair LOOK

[x!candi!x]

i dont really like this one and i think its a bit dodge so please would u tell me ways i cud improve? :s
http://tinypic.com/nrk9f
thx lol dont be to harsh! :p

[Jasmin]

Sorry I Like Your Other one better
The eyes Look scary :s
and Maybe make the hair a bit thicker K
No Hard Feelings :p