i dont really like this one and i think its a bit dodge so please would u tell me ways i cud improve? :s
thx lol dont be to harsh! :p

i dont really like this one and i think its a bit dodge so please would u tell me ways i cud improve? :s
thx lol dont be to harsh! :p
My heart beats like a drum (all night)
Flesh to flesh, one to one (and its alright)
And Ill never let go cause
Theres something I know deep inside
Sorry I Like Your Other one better
The eyes Look scary :s
and Maybe make the hair a bit thicker K
No Hard Feelings :p
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