My Life without the "Dad"

[Gaby]

This is a poem I made like a month ago and I want to share it with you all...Rate out of 0 and 10 please?.......

Dad has never been there for me,
I just don't know why,
Just because he was a new wife,
He don't have to put me aside,

His new wife Nancy deletes all my emails,
And don't answer the phone,
My Dad doesn't even know it,
I just feel all alone,

I live with my Grandma,
My mom is somewhere else,
I haven't seen my dad at all
Probably a year I guess,

I hope your happy you made your daughter upset,
Because you won't be seeing her for a while,
I know it is a bit harsh,
If you want to see me pick up the phone and dial,

Dis poem ish about me

[-Wolverine]

Wow, can't you tell where to put things?

Wrong section yet again, dear.

[Gaby]

Ugh why does this always HAPPEN!!......What section should it be in?

[NIKKEE]

who cares what section its to be in...
it was sad, but cute :]
but i wouldnt blame your dad, it was sorta nancy
though, he coulda phoned you

hmph...

[-Wolverine]

It should be in the poetry section. ^_^

[Billabong]

Also Its just a silly personal thing but I like poems to rhyme :)

[Ecko]

lOPDsdddddddddddddddd

[Polly-alyssa]

It is quite personal and sad. I think 7/10