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    Default My Life without the "Dad"

    This is a poem I made like a month ago and I want to share it with you all...Rate out of 0 and 10 please?.......

    Dad has never been there for me,
    I just don't know why,
    Just because he was a new wife,
    He don't have to put me aside,

    His new wife Nancy deletes all my emails,
    And don't answer the phone,
    My Dad doesn't even know it,
    I just feel all alone,

    I live with my Grandma,
    My mom is somewhere else,
    I haven't seen my dad at all
    Probably a year I guess,

    I hope your happy you made your daughter upset,
    Because you won't be seeing her for a while,
    I know it is a bit harsh,
    If you want to see me pick up the phone and dial,


    Dis poem ish about me
    Last edited by Gaby; 10-04-2006 at 12:57 AM.

    maturity isSOoverrated

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    Wow, can't you tell where to put things?

    Wrong section yet again, dear.

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    Ugh why does this always HAPPEN!!......What section should it be in?

    maturity isSOoverrated

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    who cares what section its to be in...
    it was sad, but cute :]
    but i wouldnt blame your dad, it was sorta nancy
    though, he coulda phoned you

    hmph...
    Grandad: I mean smoking mari-jew-arna! You brought a slur upon the family name.

    Rodney: Oh leave off Grandad. I'd have to get done for chicken molesting to bring a slur on this family's name.

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    It should be in the poetry section. ^_^

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    Also Its just a silly personal thing but I like poems to rhyme

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    lOPDsdddddddddddddddd
    Last edited by Ecko; 10-04-2006 at 05:56 AM.

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    It is quite personal and sad. I think 7/10


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