ive tried this, wot u people call 'clean' (i think)

[[Oli]]

ive tried a clean layout, (at least i think its clean one)

http://www.****************/uploads/f92cfef2f4.png
http://www.****************/uploads/f92cfef2f4.png

[Jamie.]

Wow its actually not that bad - wd!

[Raremandan]

Your one major issue is Text mate, find some good clean fonts don't go for god-awful effects all the time.

Good try though.

[[Oli]]

Your one major issue is Text mate, find some good clean fonts don't go for god-awful effects all the time.

Good try though.


yeah, rofl, all i got is crap fonts, ur right, i should really get some new ones.
(and advices ?)

edit, is this a nice font ?
http://www.1001freefonts.com/fontsdisplay/perisphere.gif

[:Blob]

Visitor, Angryblue

[Raremandan]

I use Serifs or just the ones that come with Windows.

[Jamie.]

www.dafont.com :)

[Liberation]

Wow
Producing these like wow!

So many
Love em all

[[Oli]]

Wow
Producing these like wow!

So many
Love em all

yeh in the mood of layouts ^^

[Amid]

sorry dont like the layout at all, especially the text I think the problem is the anti-aliasing and the stroke.. try pixel fonts such a visitor or serious (you can find them at dafont.com) also you might want to tone down the scanlines very low to where you can barely see them I think it gives it a better effect rather than them being so vibrant 5/10 on the layout keep working you'll get it :)

[Raremandan]

sorry dont like the layout at all, especially the text I think the problem is the anti-aliasing and the stroke.. try pixel fonts such a visitor or serious (you can find them at dafont.com) also you might want to tone down the scanlines very low to where you can barely see them I think it gives it a better effect rather than them being so vibrant 5/10 on the layout keep working you'll get it :)

Visitor just doesn't look good on layouts like that, only signatures or pixel layouts..

[DMB-Hosting]

Not as good as the last one you posted that was awsome

[[Oli]]

how about like this ?
Edit, (just look at text, better ? worse ?)

http://www.****************/uploads/1e0d33ce15.png
http://www.****************/uploads/1e0d33ce15.png

[Raremandan]

Does your text have a gradient or a filter to make it so dull? Sorry dude but use standard text without filters.

[DMB-Hosting]

Only thing i dont like about your layout is the texts

[[Oli]]

fonts;

- Arial (bold)
- Perisphere (banner)
------------------------
did somting to those scan lines like sum1 said.


http://www.****************/uploads/c9e396881d.png
http://www.****************/uploads/c9e396881d.png

[Jamie.]

sexual

[Sygon.]

Tbh oli i dont like it :(

[[Oli]]

Tbh oli i dont like it :(

sorry, am not from uk u see, but wot does tbh mean again ?

[Sygon.]

']sorry, am not from uk u see, but wot does tbh mean again ?

To be honest :)

[Jamie.]

to be honest

edit: syg beat me

[[Oli]]

k thanks ;)

[Flauvo]

I actually like this one, the green text puts me off a bit but good try :)
7/10 +Rep