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Icarus
23-07-2006, 09:36 AM
This is my first proper alt not a re-colour
it was mentto be habbo style but i don't think it has really turned out right and the shading isn't great but for my first...
Please rates out of ten and constructive critisism please
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/967/payphoneod2.pngSee what i mean didn't turn out habbo style :(

Robzor
23-07-2006, 09:50 AM
the problem is u need to make them habbo-ish .
i can see yourve tried to shade i think its decent shading
but like i said , not habbo-ish

so 7/10 ( because you tried alot ) :P

Charlie
23-07-2006, 10:31 AM
It's good for your first alt, but its not as habbo-ish as it should be. Try improving/adding some shading to it. Also, make the corners more rounded, and it should look more habbo-ish. But for now, 6/10

Icarus
23-07-2006, 11:10 AM
Also, make the corners more rounded,
How do you reckon i should do that?
I had a look in i couldn't think of a way to do it? :s
Thx for your comments so far

Robzor
23-07-2006, 11:15 AM
try using the oval tool in paint ? to help you round corners ?

ExtraKen
23-07-2006, 11:21 AM
nice for a first try... follow some tutorals to make it isomatric and shading and things ;)


but nice try ;)

Jord
23-07-2006, 01:33 PM
Too many errors, shading & not inso.

lildeep
23-07-2006, 01:58 PM
hey yeah, everyone is saying "make it more habbo-ish", but you already said you dont know how to so do you mind if i use yours to show you a habbo version i made?

Catchetat
24-07-2006, 07:52 AM
The color you chose looks nice but maybe use a bigger variety and use them for shadings. It looks ok :P Make it look isometric but REP for effort on your first try :)

Icarus
24-07-2006, 08:53 AM
lildeep go ahead by ll means and try to make a habbo-ish version i'd love to see it

Icarus
24-07-2006, 09:44 AM
sorry for double post i cliked back and edit had gone!
but anyway
I had another go at the payphone trying to make it more habbo-ish my brther helped me a little bit this time here it is
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/804/payphoneou2.png

lildeep
24-07-2006, 11:06 AM
ok i will post it in a bit :P, lemme eat brekkie first! haha

Robzor
24-07-2006, 11:09 AM
sorry for double post i cliked back and edit had gone!
but anyway
I had another go at the payphone trying to make it more habbo-ish my brther helped me a little bit this time here it is
http://img291.imageshack.us/img291/804/payphoneou2.png

that ones a bit better , well done :P

Ree...
24-07-2006, 11:10 AM
its wonky lollol

edit : oh dat new ones better

GommeInc
24-07-2006, 11:20 AM
Not bad for a first alt, but working on a Habbo alt requires isometric shapes.

http://www.gihabbo.co.uk/index.php?gi=qalts

That might help you a bit, but you don't need alot of help because you have the basic idea on making them!

8/10 if it wasn't ment to be Habbo-ish
5/10 if it is ment to be Habbo-ish.

Markness.
24-07-2006, 11:30 AM
nice shading :)

lildeep
24-07-2006, 12:17 PM
Here you go, this tuorial is a quick tut. and is very basic.
If you are just starting to do alts, it is always best to start using basic shapes, not fancy one you have chosen lol, i must admit my shading is awful in this, so do not copy my style lol, i have left out a lot of shading because this was quick and basic.
http://i7.photobucket.com/albums/y295/s4nd33p/payphonetut.png

Robzor
24-07-2006, 12:45 PM
lildeep , you should post that in tutorials :P good guide

lildeep
24-07-2006, 12:52 PM
oh thanx, hahaha i just realised on step 1 i messed up, i meant to put "three different boxes", but i accidently put "two" lol o well you all understand!

Robzor
24-07-2006, 01:01 PM
what program did u use lildeep ?

lildeep
24-07-2006, 01:17 PM
paint lol, i only ever use paint, unless im doing effects on words and letters

Rockstar
24-07-2006, 01:20 PM
Nice for first go and plu i reccomend you use something like phototshop instead of paint + rep for attemp

lildeep
24-07-2006, 01:26 PM
why use photoshop?!!?! thats rubbish for alts, all great altists use paint! photoshop is only really good for effexts

GommeInc
24-07-2006, 02:29 PM
why use photoshop?!!?! thats rubbish for alts, all great altists use paint! photoshop is only really good for effexts
And photoshop takes about 3 to 5 times longer to create an alt than it would in paint.

lildeep
24-07-2006, 04:06 PM
lol too true

Icarus
24-07-2006, 06:55 PM
thx lildeep for the tutorial it really helped lots now i've got a great looking phone box +rep

lEddy
24-07-2006, 08:29 PM
Good Try mate The Habbo Phone doesent Really Look Habbo-ish Or Pixelited Like Habbo Sorry But Its 7/10

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