My first alt (pay phone)

[Icarus]

This is my first proper alt not a re-colour
it was mentto be habbo style but i don't think it has really turned out right and the shading isn't great but for my first...
Please rates out of ten and constructive critisism please
See what i mean didn't turn out habbo style

[Robzor]

the problem is u need to make them habbo-ish .
i can see yourve tried to shade i think its decent shading
but like i said , not habbo-ish

so 7/10 ( because you tried alot )

[Charlie]

It's good for your first alt, but its not as habbo-ish as it should be. Try improving/adding some shading to it. Also, make the corners more rounded, and it should look more habbo-ish. But for now, 6/10

[Icarus]

Also, make the corners more rounded,

How do you reckon i should do that?
I had a look in i couldn't think of a way to do it? :s
Thx for your comments so far

[Robzor]

try using the oval tool in paint ? to help you round corners ?

[ExtraKen]

nice for a first try... follow some tutorals to make it isomatric and shading and things


but nice try

[Jord]

Too many errors, shading & not inso.

[lildeep]

hey yeah, everyone is saying "make it more habbo-ish", but you already said you dont know how to so do you mind if i use yours to show you a habbo version i made?

[Catchetat]

The color you chose looks nice but maybe use a bigger variety and use them for shadings. It looks ok Make it look isometric but REP for effort on your first try

[Icarus]

lildeep go ahead by ll means and try to make a habbo-ish version i'd love to see it